Its All A Distant Mirror.....................

Comin from the streets along the wansbeck – greets ya –
By the bank of the river on the right side where it meets at
Where the up and comin smokers started smokin, new found habit-at ,
Introducing drugs, bongin weed and started fuckin twat
More than that - drug-introduction acid speed, and all of dat –
Stemming off the one and only special friend the potent plant
Wandering up and down eyes blood shot red, wrecked gallivant,
Back and forth, up and down, patrolling with high chant
-High as me - the public passing - no contactin - avoidin we,
Acting like were Nazis or the new hooded up enemy?
Some hate drugs, T total never drink a pint - one two or three,
But not me - I feel free - enjoy a slightly more dangerous scene
Don’t ask why cos that’s just the way us smokers be
The new generation congregating down the river you will see,
15 year old, like looking in the mirror, going back 10 years to 1993

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When we started up things were different, not as stringent
But we came and went without repent yet we weren’t delinquent
We didn’t rape old women - murder- it’s a new infringement
Youth of today, that’s the difference, got no moral instinct
In the time you blink, one will hav burgled house for drugs and drink
When I was that age we put our money together and think
-Send the link, to the dealer, make do with make do with what we could
Whether it be a quarter if bud or only a tenna we would
-Never steal, burgle or snatch cash from our hood
-It can’t be good depriving your neighbours of their belongins
and Leaving them short like Caprice in a midgets stockings

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We all grow up and learn from mistaken acts break them
Some sooner than others, but that’s no reason for condemnation
Just like a compilation, some you like - from others creation
-Your limitation is your own, don’t sway with peer pressure
you’re, your own confessor in your mind, be better
-than the tester (aftershave), be the bottle taken home applied no lesser
not left on the shelf only sampled, put back as a bad example
be part of society - be ample – don’t trample on others unless ya willin to be trampled
you wanna sample - all walks of life and come out compatible
without regrets or turning fanatical though mad minds unmanageable!!!!

This was pretty good i thought...it flowed pretty well through out the piece, it didnt really get off that much...your vocab was good too...i thought your content was pretty well...you had meaning in there...it was a good read....overall it was a good drop...keep at it...and keep dropping.

thanx, ...........................
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yea this was nice. It flowed pretty, you vocab was straiight and the message behind this was dope....nice drop, keep it up, 1

if you got time return the favor, its gettin mad slept on......much appeciated
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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

this was madd poetic in my opinion...the vocab was very expansive in this piece...and it had pretty good structure and flow...all in all...this was a dope ass drop...keep doin' ya thing N...

thanx man, just tryin to elevate.......
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.............peace!

nice one Ndeva, good use of words and top flow, keep spittin this shit. big up.... could of done wit a hook!!!!!

that had a hella nice concept/ topic.......ur flow was on target throughout the whole post......u had some mad wordplay......ur vocab was pretty good.......i agree wit ^^him though.......it would have been even better wit a hook.....overall good shit.....keep postin.......

peace.....