The winner of this match will hold the SS Title.

Verses Due: Thursday, October 15th
Voting Ends: Sunday, October 18th

Topic: Over The Edge


you guys better make this dope!

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Seen.

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W o r d P e r f e c t

Saw.

Welcome To Story Time With Camarizzle,
Now Sit Down, Getcha Pop Corn, And Read The Epic. .

Over The Edge


Often id Awaken at Night, scared & Shaking in Freight
the conclusion to the same nightmare, Praying for Life
tears Glazed my Sight, & cold sweat Patterned my Back
As I say with Eyes Closed recalling what Happened Last. .

These flashbacks revealed the Saddened Past of 'Semag Dnim'
An Indian child, seeking revenge on those who Laughed at Him.
Saddening, semag was slaved by his family, very poor & who’s
only Grain of Hope . . actually Came From their Source of Food.
Semag Lost his Youth, he had to Labour Hard, scrape n salvage
To provide His family w/ the water most of us Take for Granted
It wasn’t much, but they managed. . up until the Major Drought,
No Water Also Meant No Food. So How Would They Feed Now?
they’d Kneel Down n pray to the sky, hoping for Drops Glistening
Plot missing, either their Guru was Busy,or Simply, Not Listening.

& as the days drew on, their came no New Answers
An anger Fueled Semags father as He Grew Anxious. .

Irate & impatient. . then he started looking for a scape goat,
wanted reasons why, n lashed out when they couldnt say so.
Semag tried to Lay low, to Stay Silent, Quiet’ and Un-touched
But his father found him, showered him w. punch after punch
Face Scuffed with violent bruising. .& inside he worsened still
Semag fought bouts of depression, paved his own Mental hell
The Gentle Yell echoed and bellowed, triggered his inner fuse,
If this was as good as life got, then wouldnt the ‘Winner’ lose?

His decision was through, Semag refused to play Gimic
Wouldnt life be much easier, if you didnt have to live it?
At this he Finished speaking, climbed atop of the Ledge,
Drew his breath, and took his final Step,

Over The Edge.


As the final credits rolled, then “That’s a wrap!” was sighed,
And you can watch the full film when its released worldwide
The words guide the reader subconsciously, hidden meanings say,
Watch Semag Dnim’s film backwards, it’ll start playing Mind Games. .


Peace.

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Unfortunetly.. I Have News That Cam (Ian)
Will No Longer Be Writing.. Therefore, Giving
Up This Match.. (Yes Maven Knows) Cam Has
Sum Problems He Needs To Deal With, Taking
3 Months Off Min. He Will Be Missed.. In Good
Nature, I'll Still Be Dropping My Piece

If Cam Wins Let Me Take Over As Champ Again
Or Understatement, Or Sand or Tik . Or Someone.

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sorry had to see something

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

~ Over The Edge ~

Sirens Screaming, Blurred Water Colored Graphics..
Missed The Talk, Grasped The Actions.. In The Time It Lasted..
What Had Happened? Common Sense Not Fitting The Dream..
Whats It Mean? Bloodied Dry Walls.. N' Him In The Scene..

(He Awoke!)
Quarter Past 2, Shakin His Thoughts From His Mind..
With Work At Nine.. Left His Thoughts Un-Defined..
He Slept It Off.. Not Thinking Much Of It..
Throbbing Hit His Head, Twists In His Stomach..
Sick, Never Quick w/ Assumptions..So He Made It..
Met w/ An Aqquantice, He Dreadfully Hated..
Fake Conversations Demonstrated Their Hatred..
Fights Instigated.. Nothing, But Never Mistaken..
Tension Breakin, Snickers Back w/ Monotone Enthusiasm..
Used It As An Advantage.. To Get Back At Him..
A Remark, A Look In Motions When They Creep Fast..
Secret Burn.. From A Belated Deep Past..
Believed Rash, Against His Once Friend..
Time N' Time Again.. Never To See Its Misleading End..

((Night After))

The Sirens Were Clearer, Made Sense Of The Graphics..
Got A Little Talk.. Re-Lived The Actions.. In The 2 Hours It Lasted..
What Had Happened? Common Sense Still Not Fitting The Dream..
Whats It Mean? Bloodied Dry Walls..w/ His Co-Worker Also In The Scene..

(He Awoke!)
This Time Getting Up.. Not Gunn Try Forgetting It..
Never Mentioned It, Just Wondered What His Mind Had Ventured In..
Whats The Image? Where Was It ?..
So Close, Yet His Mind Took It From Him..
The Day Went On.. Couldn't Make The Math..
He Sat.. Until The Man He Hated Crossed His Path..
He Laughed.. Just To Get On His Case..
Never Got Physical.. Till The Man Spit In His Face..
In Haste.. He Acted w/ His Mind Under His Fists..
He Missed.. N' Got Stabbed In His Ribs..
Bleeding.. In The Subway Station Alone..
Reached For His Phone.. But His Wife Wasn't Home..
Got Sum Treatment.. Okay.. But It Wasn't Done..
Grabbed His Gun.. Anger High.. Calm Was None..
Kicked The Man's Door Open Wide..
Seen Him Inside.. Delivered Pain Un-Mortified..
Arguments Evoked.. Hatred Provoked..
Said The Most.. With Hands Choked At His Throat..
He Pushed Him Off.. And Watched Him Fall..
Shot 3 Rounds Of The Gun.. Blood Stained Dry Walls..
Then Saw.. The Sirens Blare.. Yards Away..
Too Far To Say.. Distracted.. N' Hit Hard This Way..
Lead In His Flesh, Ahead Of His Chest..
Said His Regrets.. Then Fled Wit Whats Left..
Resolved What He Was Plottin..
Blood Clottin.. From The Arterie He Was Shot In..
Wished He Stopped It.. As He Was Apprehended..
The Man He Be-Friended.. And Thats Where It Ended..

The Sirens In His Face.. Witnessed The Graphics..
Talked The Talk.. Did The Actions, In The 2 Hours It Lasted..
It Had Happened.. Common Sense Didn't Make Up The Dream..
Found The Mean.. With Himself And The Man.. In The Same Scene


Friends.. Grown To Hate Eachother..
Lost The Reason.............................They Were Brothers..



A Parent.. Who Gave Nothing And Sold Her Kids..
He Was On The Edge..Just Needed Sumone To Push Him Over It

May Have Gone Over
But O Well.. Figured I'd
Post In Good Competition
Ne Ways.......................

Chritisizm Would Be Appreciated
If You Wann Throw Sum In

Aussy is the champ because of Cam's departure.
[closed]

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis