Cops

Im gonna rip this bitch up like im an animal\\
When you do this as a human, they call you a canibal\\
And they send u too jail, where mother fuckers lifes fail\\
But im gonna impale this weed sell the rest of this speed and run\\
Cops ruining my fucking fun chacing me down streets while im
with my homeboys freestylin too funky beats\\
i pull out a machine gun and make the cops, fbi, and cia run\\
Then i go back too my crib too get drunk\\
The funk playing in the background while i drink this shit\\
The door went flying open and i knew this was it \\
the cops shot a bullet, straight too my head, i was hit, even worse, i was dead\\

Edit: The bold was edited too what it is now.. :P

you need a lot more work, lots of words didnt rhyme, flow was choppy and some other areas u lacked in as well

keep improving ya skills tho and keep dropping

Dunno What Too Call it

All my fly girls rip the shit up\\
while i hit them from behind\\
x fucking with my mind, coke making me go blind\\
these sluts cost more then 20 dollers a minute\\
i wish i had enough money too make it last infinite\\
but im broke, so i get a hour free aslong as they get some money\\
some people think its funny and bullshit\\
but i really did hit the easter bunny\\
my life is filled with chicks all riding on my dick\\
I'l do it anyware, wether it a park or a movie flick\\

New one and edited the first one. :P