yo! my name will ring a bell in everybody's ears
even after a 100 years and all the sweat and tears is gone
this shit is gonna be the realest to the bone
it's fearful, you gonna find that this shit is like stones
i'm the hero, nobody can do this here like i can
a superman, that can capture the whole world in his hands
put the game in a trance, as i stand here fully grown, a man
and you gonna see that i ain't the average JOE
to far gone from the rest of these average hoes
i'm back home with the rest my average folks
and if you didn't know..............bitch! average blows
that's why i fight to stay ahead the game
cause you never know which mutherfucker
wants to take a shot at your name
to many pussy's claim their destined for fame
when it's just a shame they'll never blow anyway in this game
now all of a sudden i'm the mutherfucker to blame
ready to point the finger at me
so i point one back at'um
and now they ready to put me to sleep
it only seems that Jimmy got himself in to deep
and the only way i know how to handle it
is to leap at a bitch with 2 glocks that's ready to speak
with a last name RIPPER
that's what i aim to be
rip a mutherfucker's throat out so he won't be able to breath
but sometimes these pussy's be hate'n
to the point where they don't realize who the fuck they face'n
it's a bless'n just to be free
cause they just don't like what they see
think'n since i'm black that i should cuss more freely
and put word nigga in my rhyme so people can feel me
i'm one another level
a fuck'n rebel, often considered the devil
cause i speak shit that's criminal
with sick thoughts that's fuck'n subliminal
but realy my ass ain't crazy
punk rock and hip hop is realy what made me
voice: "hope for the best
but Jimmy ain't gone make it"
speak for yourself punk, i'm already graze'n past
faster then Austin a can open a can of whoop ass
you laugh, but i got somthin that make you sad
couple of shotguns shells and use'n your own blood
to write your name in the grass

this is a joke right?

no hating, but that was plain boring, plain whack and just plain plain. Go to the whackness emergency center and read some tutorials, then come back once your elevated aight

peace

word, elevate...
but it's better then the most open mics from newbs...
but still.................elevate...................

ok, not to bad for a newbie but you got work to do....flow needs work as it fell off in spots...try adding some mutlies and work a lil on your structure....vocab needs to be upped...it was pretty simple... content wasnt really that good...nothing really stood out to me...overall you got alot of work to do but keep dropping you'll get better...the more you write, the better you'll get...