Aight you,

Look today i was recruited by the Omens, best day of my life,
i feel bad for all the other crews without me its like ur side's hurtin from a knife/
damn, for them its just another missed opportunity,
but luckily for me its like a second family/
Man i thanks King of Thievez,
i hope to grow to his skill level, to have what he acheives/
i am glad to have him and this crew,
will be there to back me if i need a hand or two/
So tonight i will think of this crew while goin to bed,
how i would fight for it, til all i see is red/
to all of you i love u, ur my family,
damn this shit realyl affects u mentally/
but in good ways, i will never leave this crew,
not til the end of my days, cause hvin friends really pays/
Now this is comin from my heart to all of you,
because i dont think u understand, what i would do,
to stay true, i have so much pride to say i'm in this crew/

y'all know what i say "fuck the regime",
I'l destroy them all if they get between,
how i talk or what i'm tryin to say,
oh u think this is a game, fuck you, work before play/
oh u know this is rap, i been doin this for days,
y'all want me to stop,NEVER, not even if Jesus kneels down and prays/
So for now i am gonna go, i gotta leave
but tomorrow i'll be back, i have more emotion to relieve/

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it hit me staight in the heart
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thanks dawg.. still lookin fo mo feed back

that was pretty fuckin tight, keep'em comin

^^^thanx for the comments keep em' comin

y the hell is gbacd doin, ys he sayin keep em comin, but anywho that was pretty good homie, OMENS FO LIFE, way to be. anywho i probably wouldnt post anymore open mics sayin "fuck the regime", that could cause some trouble, just some advice though, but ur flow fell off a little throughout the post, next time try and make ur lines around the same length to help out the flow, u had pretty good vocab and wordplay, and ur content and topic was pretty original. pretty good drop for the fam.

peace.......

cool cool

this was pretty good...you got madd potential...you goin' elevate in no time at all...I'd say just throw some multi'z in there and add a lil' vocab and you'd be set...

^thanks a lot kind i really appreciate it

whoops by the way i meant king

That was one of the illest drops i've ever read, tha flow was off the hook... It was soo deep, you're gonna go a long way on this site dawg.

Can you add me on AIM:youareshit i wanna get some tips off you...
You should come try out with I.E, with skillz like that man you'll get in fo' sho...

Keep writing homie, and jsut remember YOU ILL!!!!!!!

hermano that was nice twin i liked it and it is good to see open mics repping the fam i thought me and king and sally where wthe only that did it.

thanks ^^ need mo input

thanks guys.. Omens fo life... but hey if i could get more iput that'd be great