Spectator


All of you really walk over me.. I am the earth, the pavement
You all were gifted I had the curse with you as the payment

But you destroy earth too, we tried to mend & heard nothing from you
Exposed are lives to Trama, Punished for Something we didnt even do


Disasters Occur, Hatred Dispersed with a Curse & someones Watching,
Over, Through, Around the Bend, Death is Apprehended, Time isnt Stopping.
those Keen Eyes who View the World in its Whole, Care Less of our Being,
The one Who brings Justice to Hand, Kicks Back & Ignore what he`s Seeing.
Didnt Bother to Grace us with Presents, So Life has come to Dignified Odds,
the Gallery of Peanuts throw Comments at your Lack of Care in this Job.
Palms of your Hands contains the Land where the Youth begins to Understand,
you the Spectator Laughs at Misfortune & show No Mercy upon an innocent Man.
Developed Anger knowing you Hang the Banners of my Entire Life and Faith,
Thoughts Escape, Problems Concentrate on the Ignorance of Mans Mistakes.
Only the Chosen can See the Corruption of Mother Nature & her Lifestyle,
your the Reason for Lack of Breath, you’re the reason of humans in Denial!
Recognize each and everyone of our Surroundings, Hearts Pounding, Ready for All,
Millions Dead that were able for a Savior, YOU let the World Trade Centers Fall.
& All I can do is Watch this, Just like what you Have Done every Day of the Earth,
the Power, Greatness & Respect for him is Gone, the Spectator of no Worth!

All of you really walk over me.. I am the earth, the pavement
You all were gifted I had the curse with you as the payment

But you destroy earth too, we tried to mend & heard nothing from you
Exposed are lives to Trama, Punished for Something we didnt even do


So quick to judge instead of looking for what you can do
You humans expect one person to work while you elude
Acting like your crude material..I definetly imbued imperial
Stop being stupid..Your the one who's seeing this elusive
Your abusive and make excuses saying that it's my fault
My fault for creating creatures that need to sulk to cope
Scope most of the other creations.. What do you see?
You don't see desperations from them to be the liability
Humanity isn't the stability of earth!! God aka Nature is
I'm living amongst you..Showing its not just you who live
Must live WITH other species for me to show I'm there
I'm trying to destroy you all... To stop watching despair
But you've grown stronger every time I've recreated you
Yes.. Mother Nature.. Lord Father..< I am both parents
Do you not think it hurts me when Im designated rue
To destroy you.. But why parent raise alone is flagrent


All of you really walk over me.. I am the earth, the pavement
You all were gifted I had the curse with you as the payment

But you destroy earth too, we tried to mend & heard nothing from you
Exposed are lives to Trama, Punished for Something we didnt even do

- FaZe & Potent
The New Generation

damn sn this the type of shit i be talking aboute 1 st person mutiplural concept with meaning.
this was a phenominol peace twin....i hope to see much more.

peep mines it aint quit there but its a lil something

Thank you . .

Will cheak your peace out soon .

yo this shit was hott like whoa...i liked the
concept.. WORD~PERFECT pretty much said it all...

can you peep mine?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84919

Thank you, uppin for more feedback .

nice shit!!!!!!!!!
sobeit nice job man nice peace dogg
very nice i was impressed wit ur verse
pot1ent ur was good as welll
i was definitely impressed wit ur verse as well
keep up the good work
maybe in the future us 3 could collab someday maybe

until then keep this open mics flowin

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Uppin . .

Hot


Real dope concept, ...both, ..came real nice, with some nice flow,...the scheme, was damn tite,...

Enjoyable piece, ...Props

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yeah that was some real good shit dawg the vocab was of the hook and so was everything else dawg i look forward to readin more

ill drop dude, that was a nice peice, nice concept, nice wordplay


if you ever wanna collab, i got an idea for a drop,PM me dawg

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that was fuckin awesome homie, u had mad vocab and wordplay, i was feelin ur multis and metas, ur flow seemed to be on target throughout the whole post, ur content and topic were both original, that was hella tight, keep droppin homie.

peace......

[ Uppity Up ]

Faze hit up

My collab wit Rhytmic, ...^^preciated

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You guys are both pretty good i liked the meta's and the wordplay you guys did it was pure heat here are some lines i liked from the verses..


Tight..


Tight..

Keep it coming mangs, one..

Looking for somemore Feedback. .where the hell are you G.Hod !