all i wanna do is further my ability as a mc but certain people wont let me,they just see my skin they dont wanna let me in, their gealous their envyess and all kinds of other sins, i dont wanna drop my ryme explicit but if i keep it clean youll all miss it as i hit it,you need to realise that this disguise is just something that i use to catorgarise,my lyrics of course that most of them are gimics but its ok i still kill it for the critics.well what u think?

i think u need 2 mix it up sum..parts felt stretched out a bit..but u sho potential..got sum deeps thoughts in ds,jus need dat extra drive id say,but stay up~imag

ur never gonna become an emcee wit shit like that, dont make me say the same exact things i keep sayin in all ur open mics man, u never change nothin, so really ur just wastin my time, so go peep the feedback people give u for ur other open mics, and try and change somethin, then puttin out the same shit, and gettin the same feedback. god damn.

peace.......

i agree wi gota
you need to fix ur shit if you wanna be an emcee
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