" FEARLESS FLOW "

me and my crew meet up like assemblys and we simlply headed for/
dough and a way to express our struggle through similies and metaphors/
ya mans stealin, anyway to come up in this life and give this rap game advanced healin/
guess most of ya'll aint feelin me thas the reason my record o and three (0-3)/
came up in markham and knowin me, i switched over to this rap game, i just can't picture myself writin poetry/
i think god has been dyin to send me/
and this is not even a fourth of my pain this is sumthin like an diary entry/
for a while in this i was a free agent/
mind and soul achin follow that road and to do that you gotta keep straigtened/
now i'm wit my real family in this game the MAC 4 LIFE crew/
like skip college, PACASO get signed striaght outta high school/

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

aight man, that was ok, it was kinda short, next time ima suggest make it a little longer, and try and make all ur lines about the same length to help wit the flow, u had ok vocab and wordplay, next time try and fit in a few more multis though, ur content and topic were pretty damn played in my opinion, so next time pick a more decent topic to write about.....keep droppin dude, u have ability......

peace.......