Whatup folks?

The board I post at be sleepin on my shit. So I'm trying to find a new board.


spent half my juvi life behind bars
by the age of 13 I done caught a crack charge
Read my soulja story from my battlefied scars
u think I care about u niggas?
u aint worth shit u punk
If I'm broke, then more than likely I'ma stick u up
u flynch a bunch, and fuck the paramedics
u gonna need the paulbearers to pick u up
white magic happens when u boil it hot
baking soda and change the pressure when it floats to the top
packin an official police glock that I stole from the cops
What u know about seeing a crackhead get beat
brains leaking out his ears cuz he missed a payment this week
talk is cheap, all this peace talk can cease
I'm holding 32 ounces got 64 stashed at the crib
2 plus 4 that equals 6
which means while yall on the block hustlin them nics
I'm sellin them thangs for 500 taking international trips
I stay blazed smokin that purple haze, recieving worthy praise
going through my cant hurt me faze
I know 30 ways to kill ya, u heard me dre?
I get crunked like Cassius Clay in his early days
What about them Morning Glory seeds and petroleum ether
fuck faking shit, I stand alone folk, I'm a new creature
about to release the nine millimeter to greet ya
knock u off ya feet uh...
u start shaking like ur having a siezure
I'm holding keys like Alicia
Amerikaz most wanted pleased to meet ya
Take that Powder and boil it like rice
Now tell me why, when it comes back as hard as ice
I can take it to the streets and double my price
These Lords aint Vice, V-L-K till I die
running the streets high with my guns to the sky
shooting at heaven cuz I'm already living in hell
gaining knowledge and wisdom 23 hours in a cell
where did I fail?
I'm down for my set like a Kamakazi
lyrical Natzi, u aint family play ya ass like Yahtzee
my rocks be...having fiends' eyes glossy
doped out like Ozzie, on some privacy shit
so I killed a papratzi
U think u can stop me?...That aint gonna happen
Only as a gift wrapper will u ever make it rappin
15 years old, only in the tenth grade
every week got my rent payed
been sprayed, twice and aint a dent stayed
spent days...writing my rhymes solo
this bitch gettin so low, I can't see the flow no mo'
take a photo of my life of crime my rhymes are loco
yea this some good weed but it's slack tho
holla at me at 6 o' clock exact yo
u can catch me in the back row
of a movie theatre gettin dome from a black ho
Undercovers takin pictures
drink mixtures and light fixtures set the mood to do more coke than kieth rchards

this would atract a certain genre....
you talent is there...i dont like the subject but you did a good jobe of relaying your message and gave lines that caught my attention.....overall a pretty fucken good peace for a lackluster topic.

I'ma street life rapper, I rap about the streets.

lol love the name...
aight this was long...

nice little autobio...nice way to get into the site
flow was ok... need to start saying them aloud to get equal lenght on them
vocab and word choise needs to be upped... listen to more people speak and see how you can say one thing 30 diff ways..lawyers are good at that
good drop

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85236

damn dog this is hot shit
you used multis flow structure
sound like you know bout pushin weight no fake thug keep this up dog fo real

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

i feel street topic most of us are from the street but im saying read how you troject when i say the topic....
tight though peep this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=85235