Twisted Sickness

{Intro}
ya Bound Ta Witness, Twisted Sickness In Swiftness Under The Quickest Written Spitten..

{Verse 1}
Check It....
All You Hear Is Nuthin Nuthin, Make Sumthin Outta Nuthin, Assumptions Bumpin
Functions For Mild Interuptions Eruptin MalFunctioned.. Punches Punches
Aint Nuthin But InDuctions For Struttin Productions, Hunches For Husbands
To Rub In Deductions From They Lovin They Dump Him Then Re-Done Him
Auspicious, Witness The Twisted Sickness Within The Buisness..
Bitches Contradicted Disses As Visious Writtens Admitten Spitten Thicken..
Smitten With Trickened Richness Grippin Onto Ficticious Bitches..
That Proved Vixons Lippin Superstitions In Positions For Sadistic Opptomistics
To Rip In Malicious Missons Persistant, For Instance, A Christened Pessimistic
Dishin Six In Distant Repitition Missin Targets Submitten w/ Assitants
Under Statitistics Of Sadistic Linguistics To Mix In With Visions Against
Simplistic Shit Thought Different, Sick For Shit In Twisted Ways Of Sicknesses..

(Chorus)

Cryptic Kids In Malicious Shit N' You Wanna Know What 1 Of My Pre-Writtens Is..
So Your Heard About Twisted Sicknesses.. But Now You've Witnessed It..

{Verse 2}
Bullshit By Shit Spit, Match Wits From Classic Magic Proven Tragic Under Habits
Laughin For Rations Its Happens.. Get Straight Back At It Start Rappin For Practice
Kill Faggots N' Laugh Right Bat At Him An Addict Addin Bad Mathematics As
An Advantage Its Saddened But Shit Happens.. Bad Romances Lead To Trances
Caught In Advances, Called For Dances Squared Chances To Take Down
They Captains Its Enchatin, Chantin Dramatic Chat Ins To Eliminate Half Of
These Faggots.. Its Constant.. Try Droppin Non-Responsive Responses
And Hott Shit Will Bomb This Hip Hop Shit, Tha Drama Isn’t Factual.. Its
Opinons Lectured On Topics, Check Tha Optics N’ See If I Don’t Stop This,
I Got This On Lock Bitch

Cryptic Kids In Malicious Shit N' You Wanna Know What 1 Of My Pre-Writtens Is..
So Your Heard About Twisted Sicknesses.. But Now You've Witnessed It..

{Outro}
(fading) That’s Right Muther Fuckers.. 4 Base Words That Fake Herbs
Mistake Theirs For Great Verbs….. Theirs A Pre-Write.. For Those Wondering

This had a great flow to it.. Whether alliteration was intentional it did help the flow along.. What you wanted to say was said and I was feeling that..

Props .. This was great read

that was hella ill.....u had tight flow, never fell off, ur vocab and wordplay were hella good, the content and topic were original, made for a fuckin good read, keep droppin homie, that was dope.

peace......

pretty dope drop, must be an audio u are doing soon?? if so it will be nice, ur vocabulary was dope, flow was good, multis were dope, only problem i find is repitition of the same word which gets kinda annoying, but after ur first two lines u stopped it so it was straight



nice piece, would be good to hear it on an audio to see if u can spit it

Rating:
9.4/10

It Makes Sense When i Spit It And Yes, I Can
Spit It.. iF Everything Goes According.. You Will
Hear This On Audio.. For First Time, Me In Audio

That Proved Vixons Lippin Superstitions In Positions For Sadistic Opptomistics
To Rip In Malicious Missons Persistant, For Instance, A Christened Pessimistic

^shit... has any1 seen so many words that rhymed in 2 lines?
damn... that was nice... it was kinda confusin me...
big words n all that shit hahah... but this was dope...
maybe 1 of the most defined/detailed open mics...
no wonder ur battlin fo SS champ.... champ

yo that shit was tight dawg that is the first of urs that i have read but i liked and i will keep readin it.. ppost more shit

^^^yo cant wait to hear that shit on audio auspicious, its gonna be hella tight............ill definetely be checkin into that...........

peace.......

Feedback?

hmm so this is what i have to be able to do...
Aus i can say this, you were ILL as hell on this
flow, vocab, topic was nice, mulites...just about everything was top notch

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

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yo that was sick if you gonna do an audio make sure u get a fast beat and u spit it quickly if you do this it will b heavy

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