Maven

the tip of the ocean is deeper than your fish bowl
throw out the dish full, into the garbage bag's soul
because we feed our minds with the nutrition of words
a pediatrition for verbs, rapping for kids in suburbs
there was a simpler time, where a simple little rhyme
would change a generation; need nukes to change mine
a little repetition never hurt anybody, except you
and me, cause the age of relativity is now through
and through the understanding of live and let live
original thoughts leaked on paper as if through a sieve
so lets give a round of applause for the baby boomers
caring more about a kid's education than if he's human
I'm assuming we could all be like in one mind, and find
ourselves without having to steal some road signs
reveal that our heart's kind, at least in tender parts
shiny things topping the charts; send her works of art
because we live in worlds apart, plagued by our misery
flaked like soft visionaries, confirming animosity
for everyone that came before, everyone that will come
Good help is hard to find cause we crucified God's Son

Potent

I resist all feelings but that will desist my healing
Mists concealing my visions..dispositions revealing
Provision of living as a teenager seems like hell
I'll admit it..I'm an addict.. cuz you smite me well
I rightly fell..Never held onto anything but my dick
I fuck my self up so much so that I can reply sick
Try a spick.. Desperations becomes aggrovation
All those thoughts once existed since elevation
Only half twisted gestation cuz I wasn't too bad
Well..Always persisted to pursue to be more bad
Feels like i've been had.. All i write is depression
Always seemed like i didn't fit with impressions
Yet again..Recession kicks in..Started to like sins
Only because he could never do the right thing
Sights went slim like when Shady went on the net
He'd became lazy and crazy yet adult hood had set
Are you impressed? Doesn't matter.. he doen't care
Do believe this? But a crazy adelescence did share

His Tense Thoughts.. Past, Present and Future

wErd?

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yeah that was a pretty ill drop dawg the flow was pretty good and shit so keep postin and elevatin i look forward to readin ur shit

that was a hella good collab, i thought pot1ents verse shined, but both were good, they had great vocab and wordplay, the content and topic was pretty damn original, i thought the flow was outstanding, that was probably the best part about it, it made for a superb read, great shit.......

peace........

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yo both cam with it
1st verse was emotional true and poetic
2nd complex visual and very consistent
both came with hell of good thought and concept and both were just as strong as each other plus complementory with one another.

very good rhyme and i would love to see more as a duet between you both.

i gotta give it to you both, that shit was pretty tight. you remind me of a few kids i promote out in tucson, arizona (topic wise)
keep doin your thang.
bombatomik

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Good job brothers. You both brought youre A game here. Po, your elevation from when you first came is amazing. Whenever anyone doubts their abilities i refer them to you. Thats the truth.

and Maven, if their is one person that is underrated on the net topicals & open mics wise, its you my friend. You can hand with some of the best of them.


your styles in this intertwined to form a symbiotic....dopeness. Original topics plus good writers always lead to superior open mics..