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Old 10-13-03, 09:58 PM   #1
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You Shattered Me....

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Feather-soaked flaps, tarnished halo for a fallen angel, dust garments rest on a coat rack/
A Lust harnessed heart, cardio-strings make a broken note harp, your instrumental bone patchwork/
A muddy water boat trap, broken heart puzzle pieces; completion is a futile Hope task/
‘At your service’ statements satisfy my little throne lasher, forever known as Mr. Glass among stone casters/
Victim of doornail latching, grasping seven bullets full of shattered dreams impaling five bleeding scars/
In my right hand is a dust pan, my left contains every porcelain miracle smashed with a defeated purpose/
Love Chaser with broken passion motives, floorboard chest concealment: a telltale disguise for beating hearts/
Deception is a new way of loving acceptance, broomstick requirement for a seemingly seamless person/
First time I ever saw Eden tear spillage, want fulfillment with passion drawn candle lit vigils/
Mercy and Love listen well, so I’ll just rest here as your shattered Cross Dangler symbol/
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Old 10-13-03, 09:58 PM   #2
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I will definitely add on to this later.....just wrote this during a five hour car trip.....
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Old 10-14-03, 02:25 AM   #3
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cool dawg so far so good i cant wait to hear the other end
so post it soon so i can hit it up dawg
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Old 10-14-03, 02:43 AM   #4
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i agree i want to here more you left me hanging climatic wise.
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Old 10-14-03, 03:17 AM   #5
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From: ::BROOK-NAM *to* FRISCO aNd BaCk aGaIn::
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werd...you should def hurry and finish this!! Shit was dope, im'a peep the rest when you put it up, 1
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