Don’t ever hesitate or wait till the very end. If you feel something deep in your heart then follow your heart. Don’t question but follow through. Never doubt yourself or even think low of yourself. To tell you the truth you procrastinate more than you should. Quit havin self pity and get all depressed. Quit wasting your life on something that was never there in the first place. Feeling sorry for yourself leads to depression, depression leads you down into hell, then with one stupid thought your laying in a pool of your own blood because you can’t handle life. Step the f*ck up and take handle of life, don’t be scared to make mistakes. We learn from our downfalls but bounce back with authority. What I’m getting to, or at least understand this. It’s done and over and what you think you had, psh move on now. Don’t interfere. Don’t be like a stupid child and whine cuz you don’t get what you want in life. You either fight for it if you want it but in this case you’re done. You should have known but you got hurt anyways. Learn from your own mistakes and maybe one day you might be able to understand you can’t make someone love you, they have to fall in love with you and you can’t force it. ……!!

Nice piece. Full of emotion and hatred. You must really hate the person that you are directing this poem to. All in all I say that it is full of all the hatred you feel for someone. It is a good piece though. Keep dropin JT.

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I So Agree With That!
It Was A Long And Good Poem!
Keep It Commin!

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uppin, i just literall posted this and its already to da bottom cuz of some1 tryin to rack up posts uppin

Hey, good drop, i see you postin on my stuff alot.. thanks! but i'm not sure if i followed it the whole way through... what exactly was this piece about? im a fan of your poetry though, keep it up.

iight

i liked the way you didnt even think about structure in this piece because there was to much feeling emotion love and hate in this to get side tracked with structure.

the message in this was strong and clear and it got acrossed its message. except at the end that last line or so, it changed from getting stuff you want, ect, to making ppl fall in love with you, but it wasnt a biggie.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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Good drop JT. Like mopar said, full of hate. You seem to write straight from your heart. Not to many do that. Seems like you are blaming one person, with what it seems all of your hate. Overall, good drop. Keep em comin. Most respect.

thanks all for postin on this, it means a lot to me that people respond and like what i write. Thanks again. Member it's all love, JT

it was a nice read... sounds to me more of a message to the world
that they all should read... keep writing

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