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um dis my first beat, i have a bad habit for making long intros, so please listen, to all of it if not most,

got me my little slow techno intro, a haha...........

dis sounds like Fruity Loops, really fruity beat you got here man

shit is wack dog, y the fuck u even upload this shit?

i'd prefer to listen to Chingy netime than this man, no offense

-10/10

damn,

u ass,

dat type shit comment don't help me, if u read whut i said u would understand

i said it's my first beat, the beggining wit all dat shit is the intro, if u listen about 40 sec in to beat it drops,

if u can't say nutthin nice u don't say nuffin at-tall, especially seein how u don't got no beats, or even done layed a track yet, lay da fuc off, lol

lol, sorry if i came back real harsh but damn man kewl it............

no comment....

i dont like this at all mate....
if ur gonna do something abstract try do it with some nice samples......
hhhhhm this doesnt go anywhere kinda needs something big to kick in like a massive loud banging drum loop and a phat bassline

pz


noz

ight, i aint gon really say anything since u said this was ur first beat but

your downfalls:
the instruments timing were off at points, and some didnt go well with each other, and find better drums and snares....feel me


just keep practicin, ull get it one day