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Old 10-15-03, 03:20 AM   #1
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Zoom In On The Lense

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Just a short keystlye. I figured I might as well do something thats worth someone's time while I'm visiting the site.

Zoom in on the lense, focus on the future
and as the clock bends, Father Time becomes a moocher
Takin' up all your minutes, he doesn't want you with Mother Earth
but time only exists in your mind, you decide what reality's worth
Search, within your soul, and try to find your deeper meaning
don't look at yourself as a whole, 'cause out of it your aura's bleeding
You find your hair receeding, fading away just like your mind
while your vision and reality fades too, leaving yourself blind
Don't be confined by your body, let your soul fly free
I been doin' it for years, before I became an emcee
what's emcee mean to me? I look into the mirror to find out
but when I look at my reflection, it's not myself that comes back out
It makes me shout, scream, terrifies me to death
hyperventilation, trouble takin' in a single breath
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Old 10-15-03, 10:08 AM   #2
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come on i know everyone wants to read this, so quit sleeping
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Old 10-15-03, 10:36 AM   #3
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yo twin fuck them this shit was on point...........
you have a lyricists talent in a poetic mind that is a gift twin do you
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Old 10-15-03, 12:35 PM   #4
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yea fo real this was some real good shit dawg the vocab and wordplay and agh it was all good the flow was tight and this shit was real poetic.. good shit dawg
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Old 10-15-03, 11:12 PM   #5
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^^^thx 4 the feedback... anyone else?
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Old 10-15-03, 11:15 PM   #6
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u got sum skillz
work on better wordplay u got sum potenitol tho kid
keep i t ocmin
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Old 10-16-03, 02:33 AM   #7
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well thanks... im glad you think i have potential
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Old 10-16-03, 02:39 AM   #8
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LOL^^^hes probably better than U

anyways i liked this i reckon u had good flow...im not sure the heading suites the verse i liked this line

what's emcee mean to me? I look into the mirror to find out
but when I look at my reflection, it's not myself that comes back out

^^that was nice......anyways overall it was a good drop and i hope to see more out u Pz
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Old 10-19-03, 08:46 PM   #9
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^^^shep... this was me... he isnt better dawg lol... unless you think so
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