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10-15-03, 03:55 PM
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I dont have much time but ill spit some shit.
IP:
have spit in a long time so here go.
Look through my eyes, and see a vision// this isn't my life, its my intermission// feelin pain and strife, but i stay wishin// that the beef could die, but it stay sticken// this is why, my nine millimeter stay clicken// and all the hoes stay tricken// ima be holdin it down, but im takin a licken// everyday frown, this is how shit flows in my town// round and round, dealin wid these clowns// screams of lil kids I know you hearin these sounds// shit that i did, that i never shoulda did// now im payin the bid for livin sin// this isn't the way ta win, my lifes lookin grim// the sun that was bright has now turned dim// someone turned out the lights and now i know ill neva win// I lost this fight, now my life can really begin// |
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10-15-03, 04:05 PM
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IP:
uppin for replies
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10-15-03, 05:10 PM
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP:
big ups on the flow, i like it......
Look through my eyes, and see a vision// this isn't my life, its my intermission// feelin pain and strife, but i stay wishin// that the beef could die, but it stay sticken// nice...........................keep spittin.......aight...peace!!! |
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10-15-03, 05:12 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP:
yea your flow was the best aspect of this
Your vocab was good too but the word choice was so/s overall good drop if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636 |
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10-18-03, 03:08 PM
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IP:
Uppin
thanxz to those who did reply |
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