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Chrit, 13th Desciple, Knightshade / Mental Stamina cant vote.

Chin Check. .

This stupid shit better fuckin work this time.

DETONATA's VERSE

'Ill Whitey III: hes dope' - maybe so, but ya ima pop this jerk,
though im feeling his topical shit ... could use A LOT of work!
fuck this nerd. . yeah i asked you to battle but dont curse kid,
because its Nothing personal. .kinda like reading your verses!
whats worse is. . your washed up, battle shit aint new to me,
i'll make u see More IV's than kids Studying Roman Numeracy
and battling D's lunacy, plus now no ones scared of this 'great'
fact, only people runnin from lethargic, are the girls he dates!
i'll put your world at stake, pretend like your a pimp and that,
fact is, i 69'd your bitch, and really did a Number on that ass!

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Yo kids listen up, there's someone I want to show you
It's DETONATA! The RB Legend! Oh wait, nobody knows you
Ass whoopin's overdue, Hope you did the homework on THIS bully
The God at rippin bitches, and I'm gonna leave you in Diss-belief
Switch the beat...on your ventricles as I give you a heart attack
Who's a dickryder? He's battlin me to defend his boy Camarac
Damn your wack, Leth rip this, give Det Stitches Deph-init-Ly Sew!
Way to go, he's tight as shit with niceass scripts! Deph-init-Ly Nope...
Oh, was that mean? Shave his head and mop the floor with Mr. Clean
This is obscene! Not my language, I meant your claim that your ill D

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Could you sleep anymore? i mean seriously...is it possible?

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uhh detonata ya had a nice flow, good structure, couple aight punches---lethargic ya had an ok flow, good opener, sum aight punches--nuthin really shined past the opener--which means vote=detonata

wow at how gay that vote was, if you dont want to accept it, i totally understand here. .

your choice.

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^Lmao, I was thinkin the same thing...but I didn't want to bitch about it. However, we'll keep it, simply because we're getting extremely slept on...and I would like this battle to come to a close...no matter what the result. I'm tired of searching the pages to look for it, lol.

aight both verses was short and snappy.....which makes me wanna actually read the battle so entertainment wise this battle was nice
but it lacked in punches that were hard which obviously is a major factor,so all i can go off here is who had harder punches and sustained them more......to me this was Lethargic.....his flow jus met his punches well and altho they weren't that harder punches they still beat det's.....so ma vote=Lethargic
pzzzz........

oh yeah can ya'll cats hit this up....cheers
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

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lethargic won this quite easily

punches=lethargic
flow=lethargic
personals=lethargic
creativity=lethargic

my vote=lethargic

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