"As far as RAP goes its only natural i explain"~
""Illuminate fate thru ya frail ass frame"
"Grab a barrel to practice my aim, that depends carry Mack tens"
"A baby is born the same time a man is murdered, the beggining and end"~
"Life stuck as a five thru niner"~
"A nickel plate is my fate my medicine is the ghanja"~
"It drops deep as it does on my breath"~
"Cause in life the deepest lesson is death"~

no real inspiration just trying to meddle in mediocrity 1luv.

illness, this piece was clean god, felt tha whole piece, tight vocab, tight structure. my favorite line



tight line, over all this piece was ill, keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

^good look just kinda tried, not to hard not to little just in the middle, 1luv.

Personally I'm not feeling it. I mean, the peice itself was clean and clear cut and everything.

In fact the only bad part about it I saw was the structure. People come up with funky structures, sometimes unintentionally or intentionally. But whatever the case the bars aint always be even and it messes me up when I'm reading trying to get a timing for the beat. This is one of those occasions.

I think though, besides that, the real reason I'm not feeling this peice was I couldn't find any subtance to it is all. It seems rather empty. I dunno.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.