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10-16-03, 07:08 AM
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Alliteration Assassin
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I'm the purest personification of a pessimist pointing a PP7 at ya head...
heavily you bled... half hearted heathenz will never get to the heights of heaven when they dead... assasins with an astronomical amount of ammunition that astounds... snipers spitefully snipe those sinners until they sink into a splatter of shit on the ground... I'm obligated to optimize my Open Mic Omniscience and Omnipotence... bitchez betta bring a brigade of bombs and build a bridge beyond the ocean... my scheme of simultaneus semantics throung song is structurally sound... clips came from the Calico that I clutch while my caliber of EXcellence be cuttin' these clowns... anarchist assholes almost assassinated an ambassador and anhilated my atonement of acts... fuckin' faggots flee from the federation on falseness fortold while we were forclosin' the facts... my life is living in the love of literature of all the lethal lyrical legendz... supended in space secretive spiez spill samplez of sprits from a spherical heaven... Last edited by King of Thievez : 10-16-03 at 07:32 AM. |
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10-16-03, 07:21 AM
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THAT WAS REAL FIRE TWIN....WORD CONTENT AND DELIVERY MEANING AND EMOTION ALL CONSICE......
PEEP MY NEW OPEN JOINT POP |
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10-16-03, 04:19 PM
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uppin'...
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10-16-03, 05:09 PM
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hmm, ur lines where waaay too long
im tired of people spitting 40 words a line, lol. other then that is ok but not the best you can do. nice try |
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10-16-03, 05:17 PM
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this piece was ill, ive used this style before, i like tha style it always makes a piece tighter, good vocab, good structure, loved tha rhyme scheme, tight piece all together.~1~
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10-17-03, 02:27 AM
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uppin'...
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10-17-03, 05:53 PM
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Light Weight
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good shit...stucture, flow, wordplay and vocab was on point. Short and sweet piece there STAY ACTIVE fam One+
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10-17-03, 10:07 PM
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yeah, still droppin tight shit i see, you really got the concept of flow goin, keep it up
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10-17-03, 10:19 PM
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werd...this shit was def a hot drop. Nice world play, vocab and the topic was hot. Keep it up and keep reppin BK to the fullest nah mean!! 1
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*R.I.P* Jimmy L. , Louis L. , Aj R. , Tyler R. , Chris R., Dan W. , Matt F....... " You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*" " So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said "Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner." "Wether he is a sinner I do not know." :The man replied: "All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see" John 1x 24-26 |
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10-18-03, 12:36 AM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP:
yeah that was a nice drop playa. i was feelin the vocab and u had a nice rhyme scheme.
my favorite line anarchist assholes almost assassinated an ambassador and anhilated my atonement of acts... fuckin' faggots flee from the federation on falseness fortold while we were forclosin' the facts... nice drop playa holla |
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10-18-03, 03:34 AM
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IP:
thanks for the love y'all...
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