Made to Walkin Wit Me beat(www.soundclick.com/mixmastarecordsmusic.htm)

Aiyyo I....

Eliminate niggaz wit my quik lyrics
That give me fame and a few quik chicks (Shit...)
I let a nigga know how it goes down
When it-comes-to-puttin-a-nigga-on-da fuckin ground
These lil newbies alwayz talkin tough shit
Until they see a nigga wit a real rough spit
Then they back down and turn a pussy (Like Crane...)
Like a nigga on tha inside feelin mushy (Insane...)
Deadly Spitta... spittin on tha mic (what...)
Stop... drop... Yo... Fuck Dat Syke... (nigga...)
Im sick wit it and I stay wit a style
Ima be no...ticed wit a low pro..file...
2 clicks its gone and officially over...
Or I get an A.K. and spray through ya Rover... (haha...)
I let a nigga know his role and his place
As I humiliate his ass by spittin in his face (Whooo!...)
Spittin ill on my own beat.... No joke....
Tha Bio of A.C.... its straight smoke....
Ima burn tha next battle that im goin in
Shit... I'll win tha shit while drunk off gin... (Gimme dat gin...)
I leave sane niggaz goin fuckin insane
And then I bomb baghdad like sadaam hussein
Lil Crane... Sellin Cocaine?... Uh Uhn... Nah...
I'll have this nigga sing like that nigga.. Ja....
Time's up I gotta be on tha run....
Im out faster than bullet from ur 9 milli gun...

Nigga....

Feedback on this shit.... Just sumthin I wanted to type....

seams commercial style but i like this none the less

yeah sounds commeercial but that's whats kinda hot in mainstream at the mo so, good shit..............................................

VERDICT:AIIIGHT ISH, CAN ELAVATE TO BE A GOOD WRITER

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

thanx for tha feedback. Uppin

I think you need to elevate some of the shit... some of the lyricis were all right... it was definitly main stream... And i hated the beat it was to bright an to soft for me... but keep doing ya thang

thanx newb. Feedback.