Why was he never accpeted into the crowds he died for?
Who woulda knew.. He would actually settle that score^

He was never nasty nor inconsiderate to his surrounding peers
When someone would approach him.. he was drowning in fear
Propounding to steer clear cuz people would just geer and sneer
He was convinced everyone was def to him so no one would hear
The sheer agony from a leer of an anatomy in his embodiment
Commiting suicide was immitent in his face..No trace of pigments
He was distant to the world!! So he felt he didn't belong here
Frailed from all the twisting.. Persistin people would come near
Without bein hung in fear.. But he wouldn't ever face the facts
He was too scared to look in the mirror of what might stare back
Lost footsteps was attatched.. He didn't no where he was going
He was like sugar in his coffee cuz his existence was dissolving
Resistence to involving himself was what stopped him socalising
Never moralizing the actions from factions..prejudice was deriving
Racists were driving the beauty of differentials to its destruction
Differences are deinite in people so the populations on reduction

..He was just an out-cast always setting the props for others
Could never have the stage b'cos he had no biological brothers
But how many of-us do?

that was ill, pay back the favor..... jk well it was tight tho for real, nice topic...
"Without bein hung in fear.. But he wouldn't ever face the facts
He was too scared to look in the mirror of what might stare back"

that was deep, some nice vocab and shit, good drop, flow was off but its text and this drop really didnt need it, it was kinda like a poem but thats coo.... this drop gets uh B


payce

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PAY ME BACK A FAVOUR...lol....

Since i did for u yesterday...anyway....u know ill pay u back just drop me a link to both ur new shit..!!

peace Brudda..!!

Up.. And i did reply

this was a good topic...sounds more like story line of ...lol..but it was dope..good vocab...n topic...and nice flow...and structure...keep dropin ya good open mics pot and ull keep elevatin..uve allready done it alot...good job playa...i liked this peice

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