ok lets do this

rules:
10-12 lines
no d/r hate or crew votes
u spit first
i set it up

lets see how this goes...

this time ima tear u up, and i mean u harm
i aint gonna be beat by kid from the capsicum farm
well it aint, but the pink walls makes it gayer than im actually thinkin
when im done u'll be on all fours beggin for mercy like a ship dats sinkin
ima stretch my spit, stab you wif the nouns and strangle u wif the verbs
its titanic and the ice berg, im the berg that'll sink u if u say another word
i may be weaker but i still give a damn, i wont give up if i can, ill be a man
hit you fourty times with my words, and gone b4 u can say vietnam
i'll be overunnin u if i aint gunnin u, keep spittin n be stunnin you
this is the race, and ill be runnin too, for the laugh, to see u lose
obserd, ull be sucked up this vaccum, up to the ship so aliens can zap u
its that tru, u cant do what i can do, this is it, wogzta; its back to u

alrite as soon as wongzta spits his shit i'll vote
yo x what u mean
"and gone b4 u can say vietnam"
all bout man??
you needa come harder
neway ill hit it when yous done

ok nice work.... here i go:

I'll crack out the lyrical whip, to smack you sick~ly purple/
You'll black out when I get votes like a Liberal who weekly merks you/
When I surge I'll splurge through rhythmically to lyrically hurt you/
The bad luck I brew you will shine through my rhymes to mythically curse you/
I'm so ill I'm "Contagious", spittin' magical rhymes, shapeless/
Like "Mages" I'll cast you away with skills that make us or break us/
You'd be broken, collapsed in rehab with no skills attached/
You'd bleed weakly mapped rhymes through your skinny back/
I'm biased to my advantage, the only thing with rhymes that you've managed/
Is to speak undecipherably like Spanish and bite lines like a sandwhich/
Don't say shit about icebergs, like a bitch you'll be ravaged in fact/
I'll twice-emerge to leave you thrice-merked, the Titanic is back/

Breakdown..........

Punches n personals..........= Wogzta
Structure n flow.................=Wogzta
Wordplay n Vocab..............=Wogzta

Overall................................=Wogzta

Good battle...................

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hit this shit up............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85923

Thnax, everyone's sleepin opn my batles and it's pissin me off

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

^ thank you man, your vote is appreciated... i'll drop an honest vote in your battle..... peace............................................. .................................................. ...

Lets battle.....

2morrow night if you down.....cause i know that by then you should come up with sumin, since you ducked las time, tryin 2 save ur record.......

check my post in bitch slapped

for some one down under it wurnt bad wogzta, jus kiddin'
simple man wogzta came harder
better wordplay
liked da way you played on x's shit bout da icebergs and the titanic
was sick man
nice ending too

vote=wogzta

if youve time try this shit
"be honest, be true if not nigga fuck you"
peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85024

^ thanks dude, it feels good someone thinks somethin i dropped is tight.... i'll check out ur battle

good job wogz... that was some good shit... i need more practice tho... battle u again once i get better...

upping this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................

i think wogzta cud have cum harder but he came hard enuf to beat him........
punches,metas,suatainment,flow..all wogzta
other cat jus lacked effort
vote=wogzta

make sure ya hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86214

thanks for the feedback and vote....... is appreciated....................................... .. peace

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

punches=W
metaphors/similes=W
flow=even
vocab=even

Wogsta takes this, sort of one sided

Listen I cant poll, but please vote this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86113

Favourite Lins:

Don't say shit about icebergs, like a bitch you'll be ravaged in fact/
I'll twice-emerge to leave you thrice-merked, the Titanic is back/