"He Who Is Me"

[VERSE 1]
My hypothesis is you'll die upon hearin' this
I'll affect you mentally with psychokinesis
I have more pistols than a developed plant
Only way you're comin' is wit' a penile implant
Poetic lyricist that wasn't received through genitics
I'll take away your ability to be kinesthetic
The Pacific Ocean don't compare to my flow
I glow with more skill than a celebrity talent show
I don't need a flame cuz I'm equivalent to smolder
Handin' you my verse would earn you the title fire holder
I'm skitzsofrenic and both sides join to be confluent
People say my raps are unfit, that's why I do it
A stray bullet's on its way through earth's gravity
J to the D is sure to cause a Cavalry tragedy
Grab a map to see how I became a legend
This is how my life's forever and always has been

[CHORUS]
I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me

[VERSE 2]
After digestin' this track I know y'all will overreact
Me on the mic is more arousin' than a lesbian sex act
You and me are the definition for the word contrast
I play all the important parts, you're only a name in life's cast
If I were to describe my flow I'd say it's hardcore
I'm more the center of attention than the earth's core
I know what you're thinkin', "How did he get this way"?
But I don't even know, it just came to me one day
And don't try to clone me cuz it ain't worth the risk
To join me at this level would cost you your spinal disk
I eat away at emcees like they're a full course meal
Seein' me live is like a dream, it's that unreal
And don't come around after seein' me on T.V.
Cuz if you weren't with me before, you never will be
So go pay the ten dollars and buy my audio C.D.
It's weird, I'm so dope that drugs now smoke me

[CHORUS]
I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me

[VERSE 3]
As we move on to verse three it's comin' to a close
I know I've pissed off all the guys and aroused all the hoes
Believe me when I say that my reign will last forever
There ain't nobody with a mind this clever, whatsoever
But if you are my dogg then I'm with you till the end
I'm one of the few who comprehends the meanin' of "true friend"
When hearin' this you're experiencin' a lyrical genius
And simultaneous is a personality that's spontaneous
I'm just dealin' out the facts to see how you'll play the hand
Just so you understand, I cop souls upon demand
So be careful if you're ever within my presence
The shit I invent is sure to cause a turn of events
I'm not even gon' label my work with an advisory for the parental
Let your kids be experimental before you get judgemental
I think my chest has got off everything I wanted said
Play this song over and over till your brain cells shed

[CHORUS]
I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me

WOW! I was feeling this from beginning to end. You got some mad skills, dogg. Are you planning on turning this into an audio peice? Or have you already? Either way, let me know cause I think this would do for a dope audio. Holla!

I really really like this open mic dude great fukkin flow and great rhymes. I really like your chorus its tight and just the message in ur rhymes is fukkin crazy. I don't know what else to say except this shit was fukkin mad tight. Most people don't get this good of a response from me cuz a lot of people suck but damn that shit was mad. Nice work.
-KeMy$t
hit my open mic its called THE WORLD IS MINE

this was a nice flow my nigga i felt u could have upped the vocab in the first verse but i was still feelin this piece. nice drop my nigga. keep elevatin and doin yo thang

holla

Shit was foreva..
start ta finish you mos def held ya shit down...
N i'd like ta hear this as n audio 2...
~PeAc3~

nice topic, the whole peice had nice flow, pretty tight drop.. thought the hook was good aswell, it just brings the whole thing together.......keep droppin....peace

Thanks y'all. And for the people sayin' they'd like to hear this as an audio, I'm workin on that right now. I'll post the link when it's done.

OK, but can you PM me the link because I doubt I'll be back to this thread?

^Yeah I will man. Anyone else gon' hit this up?

It was nice, ...

But,.i think its better, ..when u not tellin ,

like:
My hypothesis is you'll die upon hearin' this
I'll affect you mentally with psychokinesis
I have more pistols than a developed plant
Only way you're comin' is wit' a penile implant

Its maybe me personal , ...but al and all this was an avarage, drop, ..u need to work on some aspects, ...it flowed ok, ...but the inner structure, ...looked to me ,..kinda ...messy....but still nice drop ..

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Fuck you

^What do you mean by when I'm not tellin'?

Yo man, this was dope as hell. Are you up for a collaboration wit' me on a song I just started?

PM me some of your work first dogg then I'll let ya know.

STILL UPPIN!!!

UPPIN FOR FEEDBACK

nice song you mos def have some good vocab..