Acceptations

Edicus/ThugzDoCry Ft. Potent..

Edicius / ThugzDoCry...!
The true desire,reachin out for acceptations,
puttin a stop to dumb radical,.hummiliations.
Effective,words bombin my system,and now?,
shud i strongly resist,or act just like a pawn wow.
Lookin at the world as a game off... chess,
people tryin to arrange it, but still a mess.
People, praisin me, ..with a sarcastic, caugh,
equally desturbin my complicated. thoughts.
Unstabillitys,..destroyin aspects of my foundations,
but all i want is,it so bad? wantin some acceptations.


The world jus a place were we all shud live up to exceptations?
but one thing we share we all want and look out for the acceptations.

Potent
If I can't get accepted by your lot then i'll accept death
Never a natural born looser cuz i'll be rejected the best
Elected to be depressed..I'll cut & show inside your chest
You've no heart!! Making a fragile person deprart crowds
Being expelled from groups made me rebel & start rows
Your sharks on the prowl..All eating me alive when i cried
Got me thinking there's no one who can help me survive
Just a deprived child.. But we all know that they succeed
If you can belive..Then you can build an empire to be free
Of the infection & correlatings rejections & hating.


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THIS WAS ILL AS FUCK POTIENT CAME OUT MOST UT EVERY ELEMENT WAS HERE.STAY UP FOR REALZ

What ?

Dont rush replys man , ...i dont get u, ...be little specific..

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ill piece, structure was good, rhyme scheme was off for tha first verse, i think potient was tha one that shined mainly on this one, his verse was on point and his rhyme scheme was on point, u need more multis, other than that this colllab was illness, keep droppin tha hotness, thanks for tha replies by tha way.~1~

Edicius...
Your verse was simple, short and sweet, presented the message right there, flow was off the hook, makin it an easy read, yet still pokes fun at the mind because it has some deeper meaning coming up

potent...
your verse is the deeper meaning. Also short and sweet, this presented the topic in a deeper and more mind provoking way, where it makes me as the reader feel a lil' more sympathy for you.

Both verses added up with the chemistry of each other and just made this a dope collaboration. Good Shit.

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Sympathy lol^

This is the result of two guys beein bored in msn...

I was rushin this,..but thnx for the feed-back....^

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both came ill on this.........very nice read...enjoyed

vocab was bangin and thr worplay and flow was niceness
hottness all around on this



hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721

NO shit.. This took me & Thugz 7 minutes.. Yes 7 minutes to do.. b'cos we timed each other from as soon as the topic was thought up..

Props to Edicius & to G.Hod< There both my fam

Werd..

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Way To Rep Guys..

Edicius..
Not A Bad Piece For Being Rushed.. Coulda Gone
Into More Depth But Above Average.. Good Shit

Pot1ent..
On A Steady Elevation Path. Your Really Shinin
These Days Kid. Good Depth Here.. The Topic
Was Nice, And You Both Did Good Representing
It Here

Werd^

Thnx

Up^

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Cmon peeps ..stop sleepin..

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This was a pretty good colab even though I'm not crazy about colabs...

I hate sharing ideas for some reason.

Anyway...

Great vocab, nice flow from both.

Highlights what I feel to be unhappiness with society, unhappiness with crews, basically, it seems like giving up.

Maybe that's what was meant.

Fed up. Tired. Done.

I can relate sometimes.

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