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LM 5 62.50%
Orakilla the hun 3 37.50%
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 10-21-03, 04:09 PM   #1
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LM vs. Orakilla

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you called me out, so drop. 16 bars 30min
 
Old 10-21-03, 04:24 PM   #2
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I aint prepared for this so I'm a keystyle it/
Still this will be better than anythin you can spit/
When you see this shit you'll be speechless, so shocked you go into a fit/
I called you out so your world has truly been rocked/
And everybody thinks your wack, you've been openly mocked/
Your a joke, somebody we can poke fun at, and in this battle you've been smoked/
You should be stoned to death til your blood runs like an egg yoke/
Your parents disowned you, they dont want you/
They hate you and everythin you do, I aint lyin, this shit is true/
They swapped you for somebody new and better/
If they had the chance they would shoot you...bang bang...someone pass them that barreta/
The thing is...I dont need a weopon to go rat-a-tat-tat/
I just use my words to murder this little brat/
Fuck usin a gat, I've already shot this cat/
I called this wack bitch out for reason/
It's coz when I get an easy win it's pleasin/.



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Old 10-21-03, 04:35 PM   #3
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OK I've done a shit verse but anyway it's your turn....hurry up dawg..........................


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Old 10-21-03, 04:42 PM   #4
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You Pm'd me sayin hurry up. So do it yourself.......................................... ................................
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Old 10-21-03, 04:44 PM   #5
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Ah fuck it.. I'm' bout to log off so here goes nothing. please keep the biting to a minimum
I know you gone build your flow off of mine but just try to be original.

What does LM stand for? Alot's in a name//
Mine came from ruling man and woman, one in the same//
I'm a king amongst many and a scourge to the rest//
A plague that devours enemies, the strength in my chest//
Allows me to hold to a secret til I exhale my breath//
My body's full of molten lava, microphone on my breast//
It symbolizes my Iron Fist I hold over the West//
I conquered Cali, and your native land is gonna be next//
Kings hand me they crown in exchange for they life//
I make em lord of they lands but I'm holding the soveriegn right//
I'll feign with my left, knock you out with a right//
The major swelling your receiving is impeding your sight/
But I hope between all the bright flashes of light//
You get a glimpse of my face laughing at you, Goodnight//
But here's a message for you, take the shit to your next life//
"If you value living, join Oracleez on your next try//

post when ready.
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Old 10-21-03, 04:48 PM   #6
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Already posted. Look at the top............................................... .........................


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Old 10-21-03, 04:51 PM   #7
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your decent but your technique is far fom clean.
I like the mama jokes, but you lack a certain professionalism, your more of like a "bag" rapper.(meaning you make hella jokes instead of coming tight) but I ain't hatin on that, you got some skill in that department. All in All it's been fun

Can we get some votes cracking here?/
Maybe some quality feedback?
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Old 10-21-03, 04:51 PM   #8
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Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ...........................



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Old 10-21-03, 05:04 PM   #9
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Good luck in the votin and thanks for the comment. We've two completely different styles goin on here................Interesting
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Old 10-21-03, 05:10 PM   #10
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orikilla tha hun brought an open mic piece to this site.......not a battle spit..........so ima give this to the scoucer for obvious reasons includin punches and flow which were no doubt weak
vote=LM


plz make sure ya hit this up....or i will freepost and pester ya pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86489
 
Old 10-21-03, 05:16 PM   #11
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look at the context in which the piece is spoken. It's obviously directed at LM from the gate. But you hating on me brix is nothing new. I guess you want me to spit some of that weak ass Eight Mile type shit. I'm a pro man, it shows in the flow. An open mic piece woulda been way deeper. But I undastand you view, I read a few of your lines. I'd expect someone with your mental capactity to respond that way. Grow up a little and stop idolizing Eminem.
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Old 10-21-03, 05:16 PM   #12
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yo Ora, you still got a lot to learn, but it's good to see someone giving their feedback and not just postin shit up. I agree, on this one, your style was more in tune with destroying your opponent while LM was kind of pokin fun at you but not really punchin.

vote goes to Orakilla, because his punches hit a little bit harder, both need to elevate, not bad though

vote = orakilla
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Old 10-21-03, 05:17 PM   #13
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Yes I know my verse was wank, no need to tell me. I said that myself on the post under my verse. Anyway thanks for votin Brix...............


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Old 10-21-03, 05:19 PM   #14
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yo Ora - forgot to tell you, if the mods catch you in more than two battles at once, they will dq you in all of them (read the damn rules, I don't wanna see more people getting banned or dq'd). peace
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Old 10-21-03, 05:19 PM   #15
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And thanks for votin to Spitatcular. Told ya it would be interestin coz we both got different styles..............................
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