ite man as we sed 8 lines.u spit afta me n hur up.no d/r hate etc.

...........gd luck man
.........pz

aight checkin in .................................................. .................................................. ...........

ite peep,

yo V.A. $lim gay name, no *gimmics*,
came on rb fagged up, and no *lyrics*,

dis kids got alot of *issues*, goes thru alot of *tissues*,
kicked of otha rap site, so he writes alot of miss *you's*,

cus face it your lyrics are played, more than naughts and *crosses*,
so get ready for a KO, and 1 mre to add to your *losses*,

so no need for chemicals when i kill this *herb*,
and you agreed to this battle and got everythin u *deserverd*.

der u hav it man.drop ur shit na....................pz

aight oli here we go

dogg why'd ya come back when you were lucky befor//
now your lucks out so I'll have ta rip ya to tha core//
spittin 8 lines so you words~come~off~strong//
but how's he strong when this nerds~in~a~thong//
I'll rip ya into peices and serve~ya~on~sticks//
this fags on here with nerve~sound'n~like~chicks//
everyone knows you like to lick~on~some~dicks//
my punches so hard its like you got hit~wit~some~bricks//

ite nt bad dogg bit played but lets hav sme votes............................................. .................................................. ..................pz

well there ya go I hate anything less than 10 lines I dont really give ya enough time to throw any punches by the time you open and close there's you 8 but anyways lets get some votes that was a pretty nice verse oli you got alot better since the last time we battled

thx dogg.............................................. ......uppin(1).................................... .............................pz

OLI took this obviously. Even though he had a couple played punches, his punches were definitely harder hitting and he actually used wordplay. Slim...learn to use wordplay when you throw punches, and both of you need to work on flow. Anyway, keep elevatin folks...

Vote ~ OLI

Plz drop honest and EXPLAINED votes on this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85753

hmm.....

punches-none
flow-tie
originality-oli dogg
wordplay-oli dogg


thats about it.....vote to oli dogg mainly cuz of the originality...peace



honest votes on this battle please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86866

I liked this battle. It was short and sweet. I vote oli coz his punches hit harder. V.A. I know you can do better than this (check his sig). I cant poll coz I'm on AOL so get someone to add my vote.

And can however see's this drop an honest vote on my battle please. It's bein slept on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

oli got this shit---va ya lines just weren hard enuff---i dun't feel liek breakin it down---so i'm just gonna say work on the punches--oli got ya here with betta punches and he wrded his to flow betta----and LM ya use IE to vote not aol's browser---that's wut i do------vote=oli dogg

damn that was the first time I really tried to use multi's and it fucked me up................................................ ....

Hella Played Battle

Flow- VA
Punches- OLI
Multis- VA
Metas- Neither
Structure-VA
Enjoyable- Neither... lol sorry had to say it...

According To That Hypothesis ^

VA Took It... I Guess I Just Dont See What The Others See...

200 posts to vote on this one
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=86496

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

finally someone who saw it the same way I did I figured my punches would be weaker bet that was cause I was trying to elevate with my multi's but dont worry everyone I will give ya a real battle between me and oli if he wins this one

Wack Battle No offense
But Va slim took this wordplay was more creative wack vocabulary for both of ya but Slim got this