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Old 10-22-03, 04:21 PM   #1
Slik
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-Behind The Mask-

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Havent Written in a while....
Here it Goes...

*In class, reading a speech, decideds to break it out by freestyling.*

Reading from a writen speech--
Emotions Remain Deep inside me
No one can feel me, gotta go underneath, Deeply
Can you Redeem Me?

-Screw This, Lemme Break This Down...-

Im comin out, You guys have push too many buttons
I aint frontin, I've been hiding too long, Gotta say somethin
Been showin you smiles and happiness, i been lyin
It might be surprisin, but inside i feel like im dyin
Emotions build up inside, and any moment ima burst
Hold back from cursin, Each day, I never put my self first
I've been hiding this for to long, Im here, Do i really belong?
and you all been pickin me apart, I just wanna be gone
I've lost all self esteem becuz of you, Look what you've done!


Hook:
You've never seen me on the Outside
I remain Inside, Lettin Emotions Collide
Makin it hard to see, So I Just Hide
Its not hard to find, i only turn my back
but now im done, im out from behind the mask

Some people believe life has no reason
Well im still breathin, but u make it feel like i should be leavin
I still believin that miricales can happen
You always remain in the past, why u care what happen back then?
Do things in orderly fashion, or u'll find yo self back-track-in

Hook:
You've never seen me on the Outside
I remain Inside, Lettin Emotions Collide
Makin it hard to see, So I Just Hide
Its not hard to find, i only turn my back
but now im done, im out from behind the mask





...Just a start, dunno if i should add anymore verses...
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Old 10-22-03, 04:39 PM   #2
e.coli
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this was a hot piece my nigga i was feelin it. i liked your vocab and your rhyme scheme. this was a nice piece.

my favorite line

No one can feel me, gotta go underneath, Deeply
Can you Redeem Me?

^^nice bar



holla

Last edited by e.coli : 10-22-03 at 04:44 PM.
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