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Old 10-22-03, 08:34 PM   #1
Orikle
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Feelings Of Passion Now Gone, Split And So Torn..
Affections So Scorned, Levels Of Life Are Transformed..
Thorns Are Soon Born, Love Horns Thus Now Attacked..
Temptation Spills Facts, Purity Drips In Heat Like Wax..
Travel Backs In Search To Find The Juxtaposed Paradise..
Overflowed In Ice, What Was Pure Is Now Frozen..
Susceptably Open, Yet No Longer Walking Objects..
The Ominous Screams, Find Connection Not On Sex..
Confliction Reflects Life, Detecting Our Depiction..
The Friction Of Women, Contrast In Love Fights The Feeling..
Rights Of Yielding Deflect That Related Reflection..
Ignorance To Others, Selfish Sense Takes Heed And Smothers..
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Old 10-22-03, 10:44 PM   #2
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I could have sworn I already seen this??? Or is it just me?
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Old 10-23-03, 09:54 AM   #3
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well regardless of where it was put I liked it... I'm glad it was placed in here as well because if it had been in there I doubt I would have seen it. I loved the imagry in this peice. The dripping purity line was beautiful! It seemed to me like it had something to do with a break up or a mental distance between some one you cared about romantically. If I'm wrong I'm wrong because this peice seemed deep! I haven't seen any of your work before but I will definatly make it a point to read more of it more often because you're very tallented! Nice drop, peace
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