Yea this joint is somethin I wrote 4 the haters...word up, listen this is "hot" and I do not use this term losely. hit me up wit some feedback.

www.soundclick.com/dubmusic.htm

yea and I replied to rewind's thread and orikle's thread

Beat Is Nice..Intro Might Be a little too dragged out man..Ahhh your vocals sound a little too low..turn em up a bit..don't let the beat over-ride em coz its hard to understand you fully man...from the sound of it...sounds like you could up your delivery and emotion for like a real fire track you wanna really get some Fire into it like you mentioned and get some belief into the listener about what your spittin on so yeah mate just keep doin what you do and work on all aspects of your rhyming..the best teacher is experience ay so just go go go spit as much as you can and you will accelerate for sure...g'luck..Pz..

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uppin.... what's really good?!

checkin' this... beat started like some cheesy porn music, but tha kick was nice... ya, vocals are pretty low... nice smooth flow, this style is tooooo common tho, i like it still... hooks not bad, even quieter then the verses tho...

you were right this is a hot track, but could use some quality checkin' ya know... 1

peep my shit

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the intro is ehhh...beat is ok..not feelin the voice in the background...ya emotion is ight could be upped and ya adlibs a little high...lyrics are nice ..defintly towards the haters...flow and delivery is not bad...vocals couldbe a little higher...hook reminds me defeintly of biggies old track..lol...ight overall not a bad track...ya flow was consistant and shit...nice man...**and thanx for peepin my shit**