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Old 10-23-03, 06:16 PM   #1
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Mana man dem bored, so mana man dem draw dem keystyle

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Eyo

I choke shadows, and scoop out there bone marrow
Jano, the lone maddo - shooting bow's with my arrows
At the face of rambo, I decapicate mc's blindfolded
With my rhyme's scolding the skin on the mic im holding
Ayura
Prepare for the slaughter, prepare for the storm of the water
The reborn lord of torture
Torn from evil deprived from the mic sorcerers
Scraping your home terrain from this lone hurricane
Lone wolf, chewing on the bones of your rib cage
Rip raid engulfs with my wizadary wickadary spells
Theres a mystery that I come from hell
Hell-bent on rappers that lack the skill I possess
I compose smoke with fresh cess from the skin pores in my chest
Composing the motion of the aqua colours
And form a ocean, an emblem token known to start mc's choking
On there words, I diverse and manipulate there verse
You get chased and merked from the ghost I set raid to curse
Haunting, Im the phantom you see in the morning
The sound you hear from dusk to the sun's falling
Make you blunts jawless, I clash horns with taurus
Till his blood bubble's like porn star's in saunas
Phuk it, I might as well battle against the zodiac himself
In a home of wealth, both armed with a mic and a belt
Buckle up, you get roughed up, mucked up, Phuked up
You need 'nuff luck to battle against this leprechaun's gruff
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Old 10-23-03, 06:18 PM   #2
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Very nice son... like ur floh and diction....

keep up tha good work mayne.......
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Old 10-23-03, 06:40 PM   #3
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yo another ill drop, from the ill bruva,

you mad deep with the lyrics an shit keep it up
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Old 10-24-03, 07:46 AM   #4
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Another emcee proves UK can rock warps... I'ma set a forum that be strictly for UK talent.

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"Make you blunts jawless, I clash horns with taurus
Till his blood bubble's like porn star's in saunas"
(sick)

"I choke shadows, and scoop out there bone marrow
Jano, the lone maddo - shooting bow's with my arrows"
(Creative)


"Hell-bent on rappers that lack the skill I possess
I compose smoke with fresh cess from the skin pores in my chest"
(Fuckin' ill)

Keep em comming...
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Old 10-24-03, 09:35 AM   #5
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lol, thanx, i think i got a fan of my work : )

still upping this
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Old 10-24-03, 11:20 AM   #6
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VERY WELL DONE COMPOSED AND FLOWS WELL NOTHING I WOULD CHANGE EXCEPT ADDING MORE METAPHORS
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