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Old 10-24-03, 06:52 AM   #1
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Salvation - "The Spanish Guitar"

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This is second beat I'm posting. Little bit more uptempo. Don't have to spit extremely fast, just shorten up the bars. Cut up melody during the verses. Set up for three 24 bar verses and 8 bar hooks. Peep the melody when the chorus drops in at 1:04 .. shit is hot!!

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Edited to fix links - OpeY

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Old 10-24-03, 02:21 PM   #2
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this beat might be mashin if it wasnt for 2 things

1. the second note on the piano loop is not intune with the guitar note

2. you gotta work on eqing ur beat. when you're done you should have no problem focusing on each individual instrument. Your drums are a little lost in the mix.

also it might sound better if u added a bass line in there too.

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Old 10-24-03, 03:33 PM   #3
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^exactlly what i was gonna tell salv about the notes....out of tune

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Old 10-24-03, 07:58 PM   #4
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thanks for fixin links opey

thanks for replies as well

ill work on this

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Old 10-25-03, 03:35 PM   #5
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the songs are down bro
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