Beat -----> Eminem - If I Had.

Yo, I can't see, I got my eyes slanting till my head spins,
I'm seein double, you piss me off we'll have some dead twins,
Give me one trail and I'll take the wrong path,
This the only time I'm actually capable of doin long math,
Old Fucks always thinkin all of us are evil,
We just ordinary people squeezin the odd Needle,
Feel like I could fly for miles and not run outta breath,
I'm seein images of the future about ya death,
Your like a different shape or a slitherin snake,
Rate me a 7 and I'll have ya figurin eight's,
How can I work every single day if I'm busy lippin,
The whole fuckin bag dawg? is she trippin?
In this state my slurred verse is like fifty spittin,
But I'm in the zone as you can see These Pigs I'm swiftly hittin,
My vision is like doin a fuckin back flip but when you double spin it,
I got nice 'lines' cause other wise I'd be sober inna couple minutes,
I'm tumblin like when you fuckin stumble into under world,
Perhaps my nose is bleedin but I could do a hundred curls,
Im so high I could die and I think it's fun ta hurl,
When I hallucinate its worse then a father seein his son a girl,
Only Im in this for a long time While you wake up n say wondaful,
Before I was zoned now I can't even fuckin do simple math,
My vision's blurred, and the other day I think I saw my dimples laugh,

Damn.

Hit me up with some feedback... unless you to stoned too type..
[]Deace

i like it. I have tried to rap to a specific beat and find it quite a bit more difficult than regular rhyming. Props for that, the lyrics were good and i like the way expressed your feelings.

thanks Undeniable.
Still uppin for feedback.