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10-28-03, 01:20 AM
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In this crazy World,
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In this crazy World,
A weapon, Used to vent anger,Funnel frustration, This Nation,Fucked up method of self annilation, This world cant handle feelings, Hate inner healing, Thoughtful meaning, Happiness is dead, But like a dead rose still hasnt lost it's beauty, Just hangs an inch from ure face like a good booty,A peice of paper and pens like a vent in a steamy room,Channels out the gloom,Each words like the first step on the moon, But yet again this crazy world's never changed, From Sept 11 to the gladiator Games,To this world a lone Protestor begins to rise,So why do we stand the hate we despise? Rise!We should at least fix a compromise, Deadly lies,We know this world lives for conflict, Its needs a verdict,, Before its to late, Its fates fucked, The bulled came but it didnt duck,Too late outta luck, Some look to the stars hopeful, For a means of escape, Solar systems weight, On there shoulder, Refusin to beleave jesus moved the boulder,Belivers look forward to tellin non beleivers told-ya,Others dont care because theyve already made heaven, Got rich cause' they paved Down a rare forest for a seven eleven, Chorus*3 In this crazy world, Why do we stand the hate, In this crazy world, For it's fate we'd sooner debate, In this crazy world, Really just some thoughts perusing my head
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10-28-03, 09:38 PM
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aight
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10-28-03, 09:51 PM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP:
this was a tight piece cuz..................i was feelin yo wordplay..........this was a nice topic as well..........
my favorite line A weapon, Used to vent anger,Funnel frustration, This Nation,Fucked up method of self annilation ^^^very nice opener cuz good drop holla |
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10-28-03, 10:43 PM
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IP:
thanks uppin,
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10-28-03, 11:26 PM
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IP:
Sick! One word to explain the whole thing! I liked the topic and you kept it on it to. I gotta agree the wordplay was real tight!!
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10-28-03, 11:29 PM
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IP:
thanks uppin.........................
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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10-29-03, 01:48 AM
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IP:
come on need some more replies...............
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10-29-03, 10:44 PM
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IP:
more ereplies please
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10-29-03, 11:06 PM
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IP:
yes i agree it wus a nice piece good werdplay,nice vocabulay,metas are good
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10-29-03, 11:16 PM
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IP:
That shit was ill cuz keep doing what you doing
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10-29-03, 11:27 PM
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IP:
something other than a one liner but thanks anyway
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10-30-03, 10:36 AM
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IP:
i like the message you sending, the world has gone mad, good topic
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10-30-03, 07:28 PM
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IP:
thannks......
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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11-01-03, 09:21 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
very well writtin, you had great emotion and thoughts in that, made the reader stick in right until the last line, nice vocab also very unique keep that up peace
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11-02-03, 04:00 AM
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IP:
thanks.....
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