i see alot niggas out here tryin 2 be hard in tha street/
until they fuck wit tha wrong nigga and they heart is on tha street/
this is tha life of a nigga straight from hood/
which never consists of iced out chains or shouting "whats really good"/
i hope u truly understand/
how this type of life can consume and kill a man/
just like if a nigga swears he loves the ghetto life/
but just doesn't know his boy is ready to stab him in tha back wit a knife/
because he heard that he slept wit his wife/
when it comes to tha streets honesty and trust is in short supply/
and if you don't have enough of it if not u somebody is goin 2 die/
another scenerio if a nigga tryin 2 get up out tha hood/
really try 2 do something wit his life and only make movements that r good/
but one day just happens to make tha wrong turn/
and be4 he knows it he is feeling how tha shells burn/
i don't want u 2 make the assumption/
that if u coming from tha hood u will come up 2 be nothin/
or early in life ya final destination is death/
because u could come 2 be tha one wit tha BILL GATES type of wealth/
and if ya got big dreams/
make movements so that u can move on 2 bigger and better things/
and then HOVA won't be tha only one laying way back in tha MAYBACH/
one last thing be4 u grip tha heat/
ready 2 cock it back and knock a nigga off his feet/
wouldn't u want someone speak words rather than shells when they first meet/

just something 2 think about
holla

uppin fa feedback

first thing id say is its good to start on a strong bar, not rhyming the same word on 2 lines, but it pcks up after that, ive read the same sort of thing a few times, you could have chosen a more original subject, but not bad on the whole, you kept to the subject well, keep droppin.....peace!

return the favour and hit this plz.......
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88249

it was pretty good. i gotta say this though. bust your balls trying to come up with clever rhymes. i felt like you was saying the same thing over and over again. try to think up some new topics.

dont start with that line but otherwise shit was aight

you came off hard in the start a little shakey in the body but punch jab at the end i give that about a 7 on my lyricall dose scale-"ONE"

yo uwanna battle 10 lines

u set it up

iight bitch r u ready

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Just wait til I get ahold of an S-Mod

aiyo imma bout to smash yo ass...5 lines....keepin it quick cuz i kno yo rhymes is wack...u set it up and ill go first..iight punk?

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