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Old 10-29-03, 02:17 AM   #1
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I AM the metricly unmeasurable m.c. regardless of diameter-
The best on this planet to eneter galactic parimeters.
Leaving m.c.’s pissing themselves regardless of internal or external.
My faternal style SUNS your dna traits like the orbital inferno.
Any person who defeats me becomes indiginent-
the heat waves I display resemble sun rays…..
leaven cancer in your pigment.
You probably don’t even know what that means but you’ll infringe it-
And only prove that NONCENTZ isn’t for the mentally ignorant.
You probably hate me cause you aint me. your foul melevolence
Is evident-But it don’t take intelligence to see we aint relovent .
Not at my level I reached nirvana you still stuck in your physical frame-
You play baller while in this plain I play gladiator games.
Joust from the mouth like 13th century knights-
Add insult to injury when I assault cold wars to fist fights.
I got to eat weather its meat or a fake acolytes-
rip them with carnivore metaphors to feed my appetite.
Think you can do that ??????yeah right-
That’s like producing a straight man using a hermaphrodites-
Phenotype- and injecting it into their genotype.
I Poison all sleepers with aconites-for saying I was lame-
Then show them my style comparison when I leave them in flames.
No one is exzempt kid…..
my verse kill sleepers while narcaleptics die dreaming of my adlibs
Is it me or is the world going inasain-after producing these kind of rhymes-
ill live as one of the greatest and die unsigned.
why do I battle? Look at the news we living in war times-
I look ahead like a clock living the future not the rewind.
A product secreted after the equator was depleted.
mand kind was deleted- then replaced by a new race-
a human body with a brain downloaded from cyber space.
SO YOU THINK I FEAR THE MATRIX WAISTE?
Would I sell out 500 fans for a million man show? Hell no….
my typhoon flow-Could drown you in a teaspoon of its condenced h20








There’s a whole legion of colleagence pledging allegiance-
To holding down 3rd world countries and minorities outside their regions.
Now we got wedos callen us morenos cause we slicen whoever cuello
For dinero fucken like conejos suck my webbos you fucken pebedejos.
DARABIEL RIVERA
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Old 10-29-03, 11:35 AM   #2
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UPPIN
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Old 10-29-03, 12:05 PM   #3
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nice drop dawgy...
I like the multies and the wordplay... mad ill^^^
you gettin ALOT better...
~AshY~
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Old 10-29-03, 01:04 PM   #4
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pretty good drop man. din't really know what ur topic was about but vocab, multi's, flow was a little choppy at the beginnin but it picked up, rhyme scheme was pretty good structure was tight, and some good use of wordplay. good drop man. keep elevatin peace.

and yo. WP check out mine and Masta C's collab "High Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C) seein as u read the first one. leave some feedback. muchly appreciated peace.
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Old 10-30-03, 12:26 AM   #5
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THANK YOU AND UPPIN
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Old 11-01-03, 06:07 PM   #6
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