10 Lines Max
We get 20 min from when he checks in
No crew, hate, ect

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I whip ya cold so ya black n blue when rapped in leather
Drowin ya flow i piss on ya like dominatin weather
Ya locked down and shackled up..why ya postin like chain letters
N ya rubbered up body more over-heated than Old Escort carburetors
I got ya shakin in ya boots till ya bodys de-feated
Snitch fulla shit..when im takin his life hes quick to leak it
Like the brothers in the mother land ya revolutions long dead
Cus im stretchin ya like rubber bands till ya toes can touch ya head
Lyrical vampire..im actin like ya avy n drinkin from ya neck
Get some insurance fo that record else after this ya be in debt

Blah..Keystyle

Ya got 2 mins...........................

I merked your ass 5-1 last week, and your back for a second serving? /
Put down the chocolate cake, and this time spit something worth observing //
You cant handle this 10 line match so why your banner say lyrical perfection /
Your the kinda cat that couldn't even last 20 minutes with an erection /*
If you had an accountant write this verse you still couldn't "break even" /**
Even if ya payed peeps to listen to your music they wouldnt believe~in //
Im beatin ya so bad youll be "1ne step beyond" failure, ill end your career /
Cuz I hit you with punches so severe they'll be votin ya the "herb of the year" /
Ya shoulda stuck with your instinct, took no rematch, but you got played n agreed /
Im punchin ya so hard I ya eyes bleed, dawg you got smoked like tumbleweed //


* The lime limit is 20 min which he can't handle so I dissed his manliness.
** Break even as in he won't be 3-3.... haha

I cant vote coz it'll be a crew vote so I just wanna say good verses by both of ya's.....good luck Dominator!


Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

Uppin this shit X 1

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TOUGH battle to judge both came exactly as hard....
domionator had better punches but other cat had better flow and wordplay
vote:dominator
vote on my shit a couple lines down... please

Thanks.... lets get some registered voters tho

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Thanks.... lets get some registered voters tho

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comon peeps stop sleepin on my battles.... 10 posts till 100 for me so I will leave honest ones in your starting tommorrow or friday when I hit it.....

UPPIN X 4

Flow-Dom
personals-Dom
vocab-D A
Finishers-tie (wack)
metas-Dom
Overall Dominator had a slightly better verse.

flow=d-abyss
punches=dominator
structure=dominator
creativity=d-abyss
wordplay=dominator
overall=dominator

close battle but dominator came with harder punches and personals.

Uppin X 5..... YiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiKessssssssssssssssssssssS!!!!!

Lets get summmmmmmmmmmmmmm Votahs in hurrrrrr

opener:dom
closer:dom (i didnt understand the abyss's closer)
structure:tie
wordplay:abyss
punches:dom
overall:dom


plz hit this up wit a vote plz..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88388

Dom your doin well....keep it up dawg!
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Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect