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Old 10-29-03, 07:06 PM   #1
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Naive thinkin

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When your goin through school, like a fool you think life’s easy but its cruel
With hindsight I could begin to put right with experience’s tool
After leaving, for a while you do fuck, you pass the buck with a bit of luck
-A job’l fall on your lap, naïve thinkin, easy to fall in the trap
6 months later done shit, still hangin with my dawg’s smokin weed and getting pissed
-missed it in a blink, sitting staring thru the tunnel of my glass drink
time goes, i rose from nuthin to college, easy option but I didn’t acknowledge
half way thru the course I deferred it, preferred it getting up when I didn’t have to commit
flitt-n-it round, bit of that, bit of this, entertaining bland thoughts sittin inside, outside perpetual mist
-the abyss of my world full circle over and over like a rehearsal a commercial
showing my life dropping at the first hurdle
from 18 to 23 in a phase of negativ-ity but determined me to make the most of livin
back at college for good, willing, giving 100% til I meet the duration
don’t get me wrong havn’t ‘reformed’ my salvation, still pumpin my body with contamination
-I just split my world in 2, one climbing the ladder, the other hittin with my crew
-thru life’s lessons and blessings ive learnt its all a balance and the pivot is you
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Old 10-29-03, 08:50 PM   #2
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come on people, can i have some feedback thrown this way...........thankin yall....................
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Old 10-30-03, 07:48 AM   #3
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nice to see all the feedback flowing in........lol
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Old 10-30-03, 10:35 AM   #4
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i can totally relate to this. school sucks, it always will suck, and it always has sucked, keep it up
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Old 10-30-03, 12:10 PM   #5
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eh! dont think you quite got the message, what i was saying is when goin thru school you think its huthin, but later on you realise how important it actually is, you see?............peace
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Old 10-31-03, 06:46 AM   #6
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come on people, whats wrong with ya dawgs, aint ya givin crit no more.....lol
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Old 10-31-03, 07:29 AM   #7
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Im feelin this one a lil i know what you sayin so i can relate to it. Cause right now im at the state when i think school dont mean shit
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Old 10-31-03, 07:56 AM   #8
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this was nice verse yup im feelin it actually makes some good points so keep writtin
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Old 10-31-03, 08:53 PM   #9
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thanx foe the feed, can i get sum more here.........
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Old 10-31-03, 09:36 PM   #10
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i like the positive look towards school, but this sounds more like a poem instead of a rap, but i guess i would have to hear it. overall it was pretty tight.
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Old 11-01-03, 03:10 PM   #11
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as alwayz y'all damn Englishmen got the vocab on point......and I like the concept...it was creative...but shit...I been outta school for a coupla yearz now and I still don't see shit that it's done for me...lol...
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Old 11-01-03, 04:15 PM   #12
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i hear what ya saying dawg, but i been out it a whole lot longer that you............everyone's got their own opinion, so aight man...its all good......peace........
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