14 lines max...
due 11 EST.
no later..........
no hate, crew, d/r...
no herbs voting...let's make it 500 + posts 2 vote...
no feeding... or any of that whackness


g'luck

You'll Find Yourself With A Lot Of Bitching N' Speachlessness,
<My Name Is...Demonstrates Your Stuttering Inpediments,
Let's Put Somethin At Stake, Brixton's Rec. In Particular,
(20,8)...Wit My (4,6) N' I Intersect U On The Grid Purpendicular...


^It's Just A Taste...I Hope You Take It The Right Way,
A Coincidence You Ain't Gon' Get It...Even Tho My Initials Is BK!




i will post the rest of my 14 lines... later...
just a warm up...
n remember...u can't jack nothing from this...
it's no feeding

ok i call this ma chek in............*coughs*
ok but i'll put ma verse all in one go wen i can be bothered
and yes i'll do it in the time granted

Hi My Name Is....,Before He Told Peeps,I Ripped Out His Tongue,
Dribblin Instead Of Spittin,Jus Like A Incarcerated, Brain Dead Mong.
I'll Wreck Ma Own Record,Before This Spastik Beats Brixton,
You Lines Are All Crooked,No Time Left Tho,Merked B4 Ya Fixed'Em
Ima Catch Ya Red Handed...Coz Afta This Its Ma Lines Ya Stealing,
Jus Like A Feeble Wynona Rhyder Your Fined & Left Reeling.
Shit You'll Never Elevate,You'll Stay Down Like Roadkill,
Anythin You Had Was Flattened Out,Even Bonified Skill.
Fuk Fourteen..I'll Hit Ten,Jus Do You Over With Ma Own Personal Commandents,
Coz Moses Heres This Peasant Callin,So My Name Is Blessed And Blown In2 Fragments

*wynona ryder caught stealing and fined
*figure the rest out

And The Finale


All Right, I'm Back Again, I Was Out Back Packin Up Brix,
Marijuana Hits, I'm Highly Histarical Cuz Yo Verse Is A Kick,
"Off With The Head!", Celebrities Demanded A Red Carpet,
Attended Anxiously, They've Been Waiting To Spit In Your Cofin,
Hey! He Won Another Battle While I Was Gone, An Herbish Opponet,
If Ya Consider That Moment Golden, Shit I'd Have Brix To Roll In,
His H.I.V. Is Killin Him, He's Twisted, Just Check His Av Kids,
Your Death's Awaiting... All Of Manchester Gotta Love It!!!

Flow-HI...
metas-Brixton
vocab-Hi...
personals-Brixton
punches-Brixton
Finisher-Hi....It didn't rhyme but it didn't really have to.
It was close but Brixtons verse didn't hit hard enough. Hi....shoulda came harder though. He coulda had him.

brix takes this

wordplay=brix
flow=hi
creativity=brix
punches=brix

my vote=brix

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3033#post873033

i said 500 plus posts to be able 2 vote....
please read the rules n shit 1st...................
.................................................. ......

shit my fault playa ask a mod to take away the vote then..........my fault cuz....................................


holla

uppin 1st................500 posts my ass.dint put that in bitchslapped or the title so fuk it................................................ .......

Heres my breakdown....

flow..Hi
punches..Brix
vocab..Hi
originality...Brix
metaphors..Brix
personals...Brix

overall....Brix....i cant poll though because i dont have 500 posts

IF I COULD VOTE MY VOTE WOULD GO TO BIRXTON FOR THE BETTER FLOW N BETTER PUNCHES

HIT MY 1ST BATTLE UP N VOTE AT THIS LINK

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88478

THANKS..............PEACE

uppin uppin uppin 222nd............................................. .................................................. .............................uppin uppin uppin uppin .................................................. ..

punches = brix
personals = brix (yep, he got u there man lolol)
flow = hi (for his later part)
consistency = brix

vote = brix
Hi, no offense or anything, but dont drop another grid punchline again, that shit is wack dawg, save that shit for rappin nerds lmao lmao

not to mention that line cudnever flow so that's another downfall

thought i vote don this nah but i looked at it alredy i'll vote now....

flow=hi
punches=brix
structure=brix
creativity=brix
wordplay=hi
overall=brix

this wasn't that great a battle and why even post half ya verse and come back and do the rest just post it all at once it makes it look worse anyway---vote=brix betta punches

Brix took this...
First off, don't know why the other cat did a two parter?
It's cool though.
It seems like he was stuck lookin for vocab in the first part...
Just went for multi's and shit.
Don't think anything landed, man.
The second part was better, but still...lacking the punches Brix brought.

Wordplay: Brix
Metas: Brix
Punches: Brix
Personals: About the same
Complexity: Hi My Name Is...

There ya go...

Sorry, someone's gotta lose.

Peace

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