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Old 10-29-03, 07:38 PM   #1
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Overweight...

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Overweight

In todays society everything is based on the materialistic...
People judging quick because of your size acting spiritualistic...
Looking in mags ...
Looking for the smallest size on tags...
Making us feel bad...
being fat is truly sad...
As the sound of skinny laughter boggles your minds..
Suicide seems to be the answer that everyone finds..
pointing the gun to your head...
Think no one will miss you if your truly dead...
people knowing that your form is something odd...
But that blaiming you was blaiming God...
Could you have created yourself a new...
You wouldn't have failed in pleasing YOU...
But because humans nature is cruel...
FAT people have been put on the spotlight to be laughed at and ridiculed...



Something short but true in today society I hope you liked it and you can reflect...
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Old 10-29-03, 08:39 PM   #2
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thought the opener was quite good, but it fizzled after that, the structure just changed and i wasn't feelin it , should have kept it goin like the begining.......peace!
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Old 10-29-03, 09:46 PM   #3
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Well thanks for your oppinion...
I didn't put to much time on this and the theme is great and has great potential next time I will spend more time on it...
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Old 10-30-03, 09:40 PM   #4
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Looking for commentary and oppinions
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