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10-30-03, 10:07 AM
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[chronicles :1:] Principle Objective
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Title: Principle Objective
Lyrics: RythmicTendicies© Topic: Peace IN Northern Ireland Striving For Peace, Shootings Reputedly On The Increase... But Now We Got Partial Decommissioning At Least... Although Still Naïve, There Are Still Cowards... Running Away – Like A Spell Of Acid Rain Showers... The Government Keeping The Current Situation The Same... Witnessing Countless Lame, “We’ve Reached Peace” They Proclaim.. But The Next Act Of Terror – Comes At Us – With The Speed And Velocity Of A Speeding Train, Swiftly... They Wittingly Cover Up The Failed Treaty Attempts... But The Public Resents Their Fuckin’ Unsuccessful Acts... We’re Always Gonna be A State Apart – Face Facts... [hook x1] The Principle Objective – Is To bring Together... The Two Communities, Goin Through Stormy Weather... We’re Two States Permanently Separated... With Slim Hope Of Be Reconsolidated... Goin Through The Anguish And Emotional Pain... The Parties Disagreeing With No Political Gain... But Our Main Objective, Is To Help The People Affected... Psychological Bombs Are Still Goin Off, The Ones ,That Weren’t Detected, Those Politicians Acting Like, Hyped Up Children... When Really Their The Ones Who Should be On The Ritalin... Our History is Full of Only The Small Inferior Dates... Fuck What’s Written, We’re Still Carrying The Weights... However The Paramilitaries Have Already Decided Our Fates... Fuck All Parties, Gerry Adams n’ David Trimble... Peace A 4 Letter Word, So Complex Yet Pure n’ Simple... We’re “Starved”, Like They Were In The Camps... Still Begging Like The Winos n’ Tramps... We’re Sick Of These Separation Cramps... Cutting Into Us Like 10 Inch Knifes... What The Fuck – Will We Do With Our Lives...? [hook x3] The Principle Objective – Is To bring Together... The Two Communities, Goin Through Stormy Weather... We’re Two States Permanently Separated... With Slim Hope Of Be Reconsolidated... “Peace has to be created, in order to be maintained. It is the product of Faith, Strength, Energy, Will, Sympathy, Justice, Imagination, and the triumph of principle. It will never be achieved by passivity and quietism." |
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10-31-03, 05:22 AM
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IP:
uppin'
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10-31-03, 05:40 AM
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dope piece, nice flow,structure,vocab...liked it...
Try to give some decent reply's, not this bullshit -Edicius Last edited by Edicius : 11-01-03 at 09:00 AM. |
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10-31-03, 02:15 PM
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IP:
any chance of another reply?
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11-01-03, 08:54 AM
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IP:
^read The post above^
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11-01-03, 12:16 PM
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IP:
pretty tight piece
expressed your view and stance on the subject the yankees wont get alot of it but it was well written and covered the main aspects of the on going bull shit ocab was good...flow was good....etc lacking in some imagery perhaps but then this kind of topic can get away without it overall good the hook was alright...however the last line needs rewording props |
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11-01-03, 01:47 PM
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uppin', thanx for the replt Fg, i'll hit your SS up in a min
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