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"Emotionaly ill"-Complete By Ausrotten
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Emotionaly ill
..:chorus:..2x Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top// (and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not// I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top// wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster) Hearts broken..all his minds astray// starts smokin.. doesnt know any other way// hes just thinkin..why does it happen to him// adrenilin stim, doesnt do shyt his mind still dim//<--------(say faster than rest or verse) StYlE SwItCh Why people think rationly good bout me// hell on earth, controversy is what they dont see// beleive me, cant explain action emotions// hearts swinging so fast cause reaction proportions// motions, towards the lifes end chapter// hesitation cause inovations factor// tractor pulls, seem more novice to do// cant beleive this happened, when the fuck did i lie to you// chorus 2x Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top// (and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not// I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top// wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster) loves a funny word, well dont believe that// conformations between all, in violation get smacked// jacked up, actin feeble in life livin// im unforgotten, shes still unforgiven// sections divide, broken up to peices// my lifes book, love pages have creases// ceases, inhailing becomes impossible// comin bakk to life, shyt thats improbable// causeible feelings, translated to words//words to actions, then talk amongst the birds// now listen to the last line, i'm speakin truth still// when u think u have love, shyt gets emotionly ill// chorus 2x Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top// (and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not// I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top// wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster) now u see the tradgey has happened to me// cant explain the scene of future i see// cant complain, but thats the only shyt i do// constillation thinking of all the words that are true// stressful hate, intergrated in my mind// execption state tooken, stabbed from behind// listening, conversations turned radical// words cage u trapped in a cubeical// suitable for, anyone who expects critisism//hiding away, for a defense mechanism// settin the bar high, for every word i say// im so emotionly sick, wish i could end it today// chorus 2x Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top// (and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not// I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top// wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster, and finnaly no beat for the last line) |
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This could do with alot of work. .structure, flow, vocab, imagery, content. .the whole deal. .Just elevate & read dope pieces like mine & dez's collab. .'Witches'. .Enjoy the halloween season .
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IP:
ight thx for ma feed ma man.... uppin sum more
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