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Old 10-30-03, 01:44 PM   #1
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"Emotionaly ill"-Complete By Ausrotten

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Emotionaly ill

..:chorus:..2x

Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
(and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not//
I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster)


Hearts broken..all his minds astray// starts smokin.. doesnt know any other way//
hes just thinkin..why does it happen to him// adrenilin stim, doesnt do shyt his mind still dim//<--------(say faster than rest or verse)


StYlE SwItCh


Why people think rationly good bout me// hell on earth, controversy is what they dont see//
beleive me, cant explain action emotions// hearts swinging so fast cause reaction proportions//
motions, towards the lifes end chapter// hesitation cause inovations factor//
tractor pulls, seem more novice to do// cant beleive this happened, when the fuck did i lie to you//

chorus 2x

Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
(and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not//
I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster)


loves a funny word, well dont believe that// conformations between all, in violation get smacked//
jacked up, actin feeble in life livin// im unforgotten, shes still unforgiven//
sections divide, broken up to peices// my lifes book, love pages have creases//
ceases, inhailing becomes impossible// comin bakk to life, shyt thats improbable//
causeible feelings, translated to words//words to actions, then talk amongst the birds//
now listen to the last line, i'm speakin truth still// when u think u have love, shyt gets emotionly ill//


chorus 2x

Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
(and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not//
I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster)


now u see the tradgey has happened to me// cant explain the scene of future i see//
cant complain, but thats the only shyt i do// constillation thinking of all the words that are true//
stressful hate, intergrated in my mind// execption state tooken, stabbed from behind//
listening, conversations turned radical// words cage u trapped in a cubeical//
suitable for, anyone who expects critisism//hiding away, for a defense mechanism//
settin the bar high, for every word i say// im so emotionly sick, wish i could end it today//

chorus 2x

Casue im emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
(and I) wishin i still// could still strive but im not//
I'm emotionly ill// not alive or on top//
wishin i still had it not lovin what i got//<-----(say faster, and finnaly no beat for the last line)
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Old 10-30-03, 01:50 PM   #2
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This could do with alot of work. .structure, flow, vocab, imagery, content. .the whole deal. .Just elevate & read dope pieces like mine & dez's collab. .'Witches'. .Enjoy the halloween season .
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Old 10-30-03, 08:37 PM   #3
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ight thx for ma feed ma man.... uppin sum more
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