10 lines
all rule applies

check in and spit

this aint ma check in tho

Just got back from a game


I 'Put Out' So many Punches U could almost call me 'A Hoe'
This kids Ryhmes wouldnt be Sick as Tap Water in Mexico
We're About to see a Pussy get Ripped Like bloody Bed Sheets
This bitch lost to a 30 year old man and a Dog thats In Heat (Hipanics avatar)
Serving No meat, like a Vegetarian Waitress standing In Protest
Strippin the Victory frum you like Olympic Positive Drug Tests
Breakin U like the Big Boom, Couldnt see this Win On Shrooms
Ur survival Process is Over, Its a Rap like Caterpiller Cocoons
This kid AInt real, he's just a Blair Witch Cronical Mystery
If Ya name is The Legend? Then I guess that makes U History

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88551
^^ u may need to check that battle to get a line I used on him
and b sure to check his profile

Watch me scramble both our recs and leave Thorn w/ 16-2 (ponder on that 1)
You naturally Ill? What?...Where You were born w/ HIV too???
Fuck merkin him I'ma murder him, hand me the metal 9
Leave ya vital signs like ya uppins, nut'n' but a flatline
Is that a Thorn? Nah jes this dead man's crooked ass halo(avatar)
I'm King of da personals, you jes da Ring leader of a circle of gay folks
What man [likes sports] w/ males runnin in short shorts all day long ???
If y'learn how to whisper we wouldnt hear y'sayin "I wanna see him in a thong"
W/ a name like thorn it's obvious you belong w/ Rb's [herb] garden(think about it)
Open ya dome and smack you w/ a Thorn bush so y'can say I mentally scarred him

opener:tie
closer:thorn
structure:tie
wordplay:tie
punches:thorn
overall:thorn

thorn took this with harder hittin punches

fav line
This kid AInt real, he's just a Blair Witch Cronical Mystery
If Ya name is The Legend? Then I guess that makes U History
^^sick punch, an personal


nice battle fairly equal, but thorn came harder

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Weird Breakdown^

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uppin for some votes

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uppin for the third time

come on ya'll, dont sleep on this shit man............................................... .....

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L's breakdown;

punches - Thorn
flow - Legend
opener - Thorn
closer - Thorn
personals - Legend
creativety - Thorn

Overall - Thorn

Good battle but Thorn got it....check the breakdown for reasons.
Vote Thorn

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1940 - 2002

In Respect

Battle Cleaned Of Freeposts And Such
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Both were so so, but personally, I think Thorn is over rated. He sucks, and my vote will never go to a crappy rapper.

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This wuz a good battle but i think Thorn took this to harder punches. Props to both of ya.

Favorite lines:

This kid AInt real, he's just a Blair Witch Cronical Mystery
If Ya name is The Legend? Then I guess that makes U History