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10-30-03, 04:36 PM
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A.K.A Mischief Since '00.
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Mind Thoughts (lil piece)
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diamond cut, perfection, too bad only in fantasy...
faults, lack of presision, caught up on vanity... its a collamity, what brought on this insanity... who really is the wrong one here, them or me... rememberin all the things grown up i heard... the thought of rap or anything else was plain abserd... blue caller the best, won't accept nuffin else... tryin ya best be in the long run ya just worthless... in a twisted world dog eat dog, and other sayings... reverse racism just as worse, social structure craving... it wasn't spose to be like this, we made it this way... denyin rights, roits and wars need to stop today... plagues aren't over, just in different forms fittin times... stop the beef, hate supportin the enemy in writin lines... tongue speaks death more powerful than man made machines... supposively over 90% saved, we need to wake up from the dreams... just a lil vent or so to speak... blah blah respond
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10-30-03, 04:55 PM
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IP:
illness, hot vocab,tight structure, nicely laid out, didnt fall off,it wasnt choppy,good wordplay,all in all i thought this piece was ill,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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10-30-03, 05:37 PM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP:
i was really feelin this piece u had some nice wordplay in there as well as a nice rhyme scheme.
my favorite line tongue speaks death more powerful than man made machines... supposively over 90% saved, we need to wake up from the dreams... ^^^lovely bar...............lol nice drop holla |
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10-30-03, 05:41 PM
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A.K.A Mischief Since '00.
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IP:
Thanx mayne, i just felt like i needed to vent or so to speak...
glad to see ya'll liked...
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