14 lines maxed out
Spit in an hour or so
Check In and Good Luck


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hmmm....sounds ill.......sorry for freepost but need vet vote honest one at that


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88609

Damn dude its been 2 hours

Stop prewritting, or stop pickin your ass and spit


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The time has come...For me to remove this Thorn
His memory scorned, cuz He's been wack since he was born
16 and already he's got H.I.V. (crew) Damn what a shame (profile)
Oh weLL, Fuck it....Thorn didn't really mean shit 2 the rap game
I'm sick...But hey this guy Thorn's iLL...Literally
Now watch as I cut this punk's life support lyrically
I see he Got 16 wins..Bet $100 they came from herbs
Elevate? he really didn't..Plus he tripped on the learnin curb
Now watch when he drop his verse, he'll spit like Newbs do
We can all there's no U in Herb, but there's a lot of Herb in U
Yes it's true...Dude don't try and deny it, U Bitchin
Watch me squat over ya mouth..Lets see u talk shit then
Listen to me u admitted defeat be4 we even started this game
Think I'm Lyin? Want Proof? He Even put (ILL) beside my name (Thread title)
At least u tellin the truth for once in ya Pathetic lil life
U've lost once be4...fucked with me..& now u lost twice

This was a blind spit u could of easily dropped first stupid....WTF u was waitin on me 4?

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Ur a Pheasant, Capcoms best Servings R just my Lyrical Scrapts
His Taste of Style is Dryer than Magic Markers with out Top Caps
No1 takes U Serious, Like Club Raves Screaming 'Roofes on Fire'
Ya styles Messed out of Proportion, like High Intensity Blow Dryers
Ya Gettin Owned n' Used, Like Male Preying Mantis' after Mate
This kids Battled more Newbs than African Country Fertility Rates
Ur lines are as Consistant as that group called Diomond Mindz
Failing Tests is the Only Way Ur Performance is Getting Signed
Just Stop, Cap Wouldnt Explode as Continuously Dropped Pop
Ur gettin Shook From These Dirty Hits Like Face 1rst Wit Cleaning Mops
I'll Destroy Capcoms Surface like Summer Outdoor Hockey Rinks
Ya Answers in Battles R never Consistant makin U The Warlords Weakest Link
Warlords should turn on u Faster than Werewolves wit Full Moons
This Cunt wont be able to Kill Me, He's battling a Looni Toon
Seeking Ur Crew Spot, I notified ya group so They'd Turn-To-Me
U wouldnt be given Votes if this was an Party Pledge Ferternity

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The time has come...For me to remove this Thorn
His memory scorned, cuz He's been wack since he was born
^^^ nothing really there, some dry lines, okay multis

16 and already he's got H.I.V. (crew) Damn what a shame (profile)
Oh weLL, Fuck it....Thorn didn't really mean shit 2 the rap game
^^^^ poor way to crack on his crew, didnt really hit hard

I'm sick...But hey this guy Thorn's iLL...Literally
^^^ again, yes its a personal, but didnt come out so hard, cud have been better if it was worded a bit differently


Listen to me u admitted defeat be4 we even started this game
Think I'm Lyin? Want Proof? He Even put (ILL) beside my name
^^^ that was actually good

(Thread title)
At least u tellin the truth for once in ya Pathetic lil life
U've lost once be4...fucked with me..& now u lost twice
^^ decent

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Thorn

Ur a Pheasant, Capcoms best Servings R just my Lyrical Scrapts
His Taste of Style is Dryer than Magic Markers with out Top Caps
^^^ got that, nice creativity, nothing too hard tho
No1 takes U Serious, Like Club Raves Screaming 'Roofes on Fire'
^^haha
Ya styles Messed out of Proportion, like High Intensity Blow Dryers
^^haha, nice creativity again

Ya Gettin Owned n' Used, Like Male Preying Mantis' after Mate
This kids Battled more Newbs than African Country Fertility Rates
Ur lines are as Consistant as that group called Diomond Mindz
Failing Tests is the Only Way Ur Performance is Getting Signed
Just Stop, Cap Wouldnt Explode as Continuously Dropped Pop
Ur gettin Shook From These Dirty Hits Like Face 1rst Wit Cleaning Mops
I'll Destroy Capcoms Surface like Summer Outdoor Hockey Rinks
^^ hmm not bad
Ya Answers in Battles R never Consistant makin U The Warlords Weakest Link
Warlords should turn on u Faster than Werewolves wit Full Moons
^^ hahaa
This Cunt wont be able to Kill Me, He's battling a Looni Toon
Seeking Ur Crew Spot, I notified ya group so They'd Turn-To-Me
U wouldnt be given Votes if this was an Party Pledge Ferternity
^^ not bad, poor for a closer tho in my opinion

Thorn basically got this w/ harder hittin punches and showed some creativity in his spit

vote = thorn

ok here's how I'm gonna work the grading for this battle....if your bar is average you get nothing/////+1 for a good bar, +2 for a very nice bar, +3 for best bar of the battle....also -1 for weak, -2 for wack, -3 for wack as fuck....got it? good...now on with the voting...

Capcom-
The time has come...For me to remove this Thorn
His memory scorned, cuz He's been wack since he was born

average...


16 and already he's got H.I.V. (crew) Damn what a shame (profile)
Oh weLL, Fuck it....Thorn didn't really mean shit 2 the rap game

^^first line nice.....second also....+1

I'm sick...But hey this guy Thorn's iLL...Literally
Now watch as I cut this punk's life support lyrically

^^cmon man...wtf?...weak as hell.....-2


I see he Got 16 wins..Bet $100 they came from herbs
Elevate? he really didn't..Plus he tripped on the learnin curb

^^lol...the learning curb part was funny...+2 solid punch

Now watch when he drop his verse, he'll spit like Newbs do
We can all there's no U in Herb, but there's a lot of Herb in U

^^this line may be more played then defeet, I've even used something like it before like "sure there's no U in wack, but there's a lot of Wack in U"...anyways...played as fuck so -3

Yes it's true...Dude don't try and deny it, U Bitchin
Watch me squat over ya mouth..Lets see u talk shit then

ok...you're picking it up a bit....+1


Listen to me u admitted defeat be4 we even started this game
Think I'm Lyin? Want Proof? He Even put (ILL) beside my name

^^haha...nice shit...+3 (best bar of the battle....)

At least u tellin the truth for once in ya Pathetic lil life
U've lost once be4...fucked with me..& now u lost twice

^^average

Total=+2

thorn-
Ur a Pheasant, Capcoms best Servings R just my Lyrical Scrapts
His Taste of Style is Dryer than Magic Markers with out Top Caps

^^average.

No1 takes U Serious, Like Club Raves Screaming 'Roofes on Fire'
Ya styles Messed out of Proportion, like High Intensity Blow Dryers

^^nice...+1

Ya Gettin Owned n' Used, Like Male Preying Mantis' after Mate
This kids Battled more Newbs than African Country Fertility Rates

^^funny...nice...+1

Ur lines are as Consistant as that group called Diomond Mindz
Failing Tests is the Only Way Ur Performance is Getting Signed

^^weak...-1


Just Stop, Cap Wouldnt Explode as Continuously Dropped Pop
Ur gettin Shook From These Dirty Hits Like Face 1rst Wit Cleaning Mops

^^average...

I'll Destroy Capcoms Surface like Summer Outdoor Hockey Rinks
Ya Answers in Battles R never Consistant makin U The Warlords Weakest Link

^^nice...+1

Warlords should turn on u Faster than Werewolves wit Full Moons
This Cunt wont be able to Kill Me, He's battling a Looni Toon

^^I get it but......weak...-1


Seeking Ur Crew Spot, I notified ya group so They'd Turn-To-Me
U wouldnt be given Votes if this was an Party Pledge Ferternity

^^average...

Total=+2

ok so.......tie.....now I must break it down further

Punches=tie
Flow=tie
Wordplay=tie
Vocab=tie
Creativity=tie
More played=capcom(not good)
More wack lines=capcom

favorite line=capcom

overall, close ass shit, but I'm going with thorn for one simple reason, capcom's verse was like a series of hills, a nice punch, a wack punch, an awesome punch, a weak punch...etc...while thorn displayed consistency, had a couple of weak bars...but nothing really wack....so even thoguh capcom had the best line of the battle, I feel thorn took this, barely....

Vote=thorn

opener-thorn
closer-thorn
punches-tie
personals-tie
overal-thorn

good battle props to both of ya
thorn u shud battle chrit and axe cuz u have come up on a lot of wins in the span of like three weeks

U didnt Poll

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if i could vote... thorn would have my vote
no hate capcom , urs was pretty good
but......... i like thorns better


can somone vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

thanks
peace out

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