10 Lines Max
No Bullshit...d/r etc
No Crew Votes
12hrs Max To Drop
Checkin Before Drop

aight, ima checkin in, take it its a blind drop............dunno why you want 12 hours, but its coo......i'll post up later then.....

Check...Cus i got shit to do

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Found ‘Abyss’ in the dictionary, it sums this up blissfully/
It Means void, which means ‘annulled’, like you…. History!/
It also means ‘deep hole’, which is kinda significant/
Gonna toss ya into one, RB to RIP im just so fucking militant /
You named yourself after a film, bout water sort’a living/
Kinda like you, see through, wet, bland, not very filling/
Speakin of fillings, like the ones in your teeth your fake/
Like the ‘void’ they fill, a leave ya with metaphoric toothache/
by ya standards so far, another defeat without doubt of MANY/
It’s a good job ya a ‘bottomless gulf’ - well … to drop a bad penny/


~D~, dont take all day to post yours, i wanna get it goin.k.......

This Tom Hanks wannab outa this world..runnin for the forest
I got Ya Corupted visions so merked Masta C'l become a florist
Fuckin retard..ya gotta look my name up in the dictionary
This fools writin into the abyss like hes playin pictionary
My drops religous...ya so wack all ya rhymes outa my book
This niggaz lines like his gurl..aint gettin a second look
I spit flames...when i drop peeps be sayin "fire in the hole"
This herbs meetin the King Pin..n gettin straight bowled
My illness gives ya night fever so ya can be like Travolta
Usin my lyrical tools likka drill sergeant im quick to fault ya

Explinations:

-Tom hanks was in forest gump runnin alot...aliens run 2 d forest
-His crew is called Corupted visons n d leader is Masta C
-His verse is straight out d dictionary
-Ya smoke weed/ herbs in a bowl
-Hes's called Deva...like disco deva..John Travolta was in night fever

lol drunken keystyle

Flow- D~Abyss [not by much tho your last 2 lines fell off]
Punches- Deva
Vocab- Deva [By far... annulled, blissfully, metaphorically]
Creativity- Deva [I liked that tooth shit]
Overall: Deva

D~Abyss.... no hate man but you came outta kinda weak, your last battle -vs- me, even tho it was 5-0, was still a lot stronger. Your first six lines wernt bad man but just look at your rhymes in the last 4 lines.... they were weak.... and haha NEVER EVER rap about John Travolta.... anyways I thought id try to help a lil cuz ive faced ya twice, seen yo shit and think your a cool cat so yah...

Please hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=dominator

i'll hit your but it'll have to be tomorrow, im fucked and goin to bed....aight........................peace!

i disagree with the first voter.

punches - abyss
flow - tied as usual
multies - none

overall : yall came extremely well for a front lines battle. nice job.. but abyss won this with more creativity and a few good punches... both nice job keep it up .

abyss won with punches thats it that was a striaght verse
vote=abyss
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87194

thanks fo votin

gimmi a min to hit up them battles

some 1 aint polled...

3-0 me

uppin 1
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NICE BATTLE BOTH HAD NICE FLOW AND SUM AIGHT LINES
punches=abyss
personals=abyss
metas=deva
flow=tie
sustainment=abyss
vocab=tie
overall=abyss

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THE BATTLE IN MA SIG OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN YA

~D~ you said some one hasn't voted, 3-0 to you, but if you look you'll see the one who hasn't poll'd voted for me................2-1, aight.......

sorry man i didn't see Brix's vote....
so it should be 3-1 to you,.......peace!
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decent battle
both came out strong with good punches
but I think I'll have to go for abyss becuz he came hard with every line he dropped
good flows and creativity as well

vote - abyss

cud you return da favur? thx
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88993

i voted on this so make sure youz hit the battle in ma sig............................................... .................................................. ...........................................pz