http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/artloc.htm

"Underground"

Beat - Necro "underground"

Order..

Art-Loc - 1st verse, hooks, an' 2nd verse
BLuNT - 3rd verse

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Best shit I remember hearing from you. Sounds like your not trying to sound like a rapper so much anymore. I havnt slept in like 48 hours... maybe ill come back later pz

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Concise Music

ummm... i guess... the track was about being an' underground rapper... lol... so ya, peace...

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ok.. dope beat.. flow is a little off.. and sometimes you speed up too much .. might be the bar was written stretched...delivery needs more emotion.. it doesnt work when you drag out words... overall this is an ok traack man.. lyour vocals need to be cleaned more or upped some..sometimes its a little hard to understand... just work on the quality a little... a little more emotion in your delivery some.. and flow a little..that may be fixed by bar lengths.. dont take this as harsh i just try to point out what need swork so people improve..keep dropping man
peace

oh and i forgot to break down the second mc delivery is little better.... flow is more on beat ..but a little choppy..cool tho

return the favor please..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89343

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Im nice.... and not as a person

okay, shit,... i thought you were talking 'bout me .... i'm the second one... so thanx... i'll pass that on to my boy tho... peace..

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