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11-02-03, 10:59 PM
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Synical Ego
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"Synical Ego"
By Synical Verse 1 Meet my synical ego, elite criminal hero, deceetful... Turn any situation from happy to anti-gleeful... All hate, you'll never find any of this so called peace-foo... I'll cut your microphone chord along with your wrist-too... Any emcee, you'll get dissed too, im untraceable... In-erasable, distaste the hate i bring you, non-subliminal... Un-rateable, too elite, my path is unshakable... Steadily i perform this form of flowmation with my serial... Shaft, conquer any task brought to me, feel my wrath... I'll seel my own cas-ket, im surprised so many emcees lasted... No one dares step up, knowin' they'd get blasted... Flowing with percise tactics, spittin' rapid like automatics... No emcee alive with catch up and get intact-with-this... Synical, hittin' ya'll up with another classic-shit... Verse 2 Its the syn in me which causes a chain reaction... let me get my words intact-with, you, relax-kid... Measures are drastic, expandin' this zone with roamin' tactics... Filter your dome with a chrome tonight-quick... Check the audio out, i blast it, fast-with, non-stop verbal pho-nics... Dialect so advanced dinosaurs are once alive-kid.. The sources of my horror verses disperses mass amounts of emcee filled hearses... Donate your organs to support earth's unborn corpses... Watch how i kick lyrics far beyond where your intellectual world-is... Dog-tag 'stead of blinged chains, only i could sport-this... No more worries, all emcees decease rest in pieces... I increase the need to delete any emcee that won't admit defeat... Flow indiscreet so when i spit verbal poison is what i release... There's no wrong way to eat an emcee like eatin' a reeses... My structure is apocalyptic, no possible way you can possibly cease-this... Verse 3 So come and witness the illness for yourselves... I rock the bells, send two verbal shot, send you directly to hell... You not feelin' to well, better be prepared... I was dared so now im makin' this shit a fuckin' nightmare... for you emcees who aren't prepared to see me... Can't you tell you'll never reach my le-vel, of skills or knowledge... I'll salvage-your-souls and harvest-your-gold... Your garbage, its told, i was bold since the day i was born... I'm savage with words, worn all over my mouth, no ones bored... when i strike with my death tone, Don't test me... ...Cuz you don't know what i am prone, to do or say... I didn't develop this, it just comes out this way... In a way, it can't be explained so refrain and dont proclaim... ...you the best in the game, you're insane, if i lash out at you... ...There's no possible way i could be tamed... |
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11-02-03, 11:17 PM
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11-04-03, 07:12 AM
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uppin'..
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11-04-03, 01:38 PM
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this was a good piece, for a person just starting out it was actually really dope. nice flow and wordplay keep it up
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11-05-03, 12:10 AM
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Not starting out...lol
I've been rappin' for a while... Thanks for the feedback though, much appriciated... C'mon people, feedback.... |
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11-05-03, 07:09 AM
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Raw drop here...
Verse 1 was a killer... And tha rest came with heat... Some ill shit drop here... I hope to see more... |
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11-05-03, 04:11 PM
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nice shit homie. 1st verse was the best one. straight shit dawg keep posting dawg. wanna read some more.
HOLLA |
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11-05-03, 10:21 PM
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damn that first verse was hot as hell,
and i really liked the way the rest flowed over all id rate it a 8.5/10 |
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11-06-03, 02:34 PM
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Yo thanks for the feedback people...
Good lookin'... |
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11-06-03, 10:58 PM
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11-06-03, 11:16 PM
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Light Weight
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Nice flow, i enjoyed reading it Peace
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11-06-03, 11:24 PM
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yo that shit was ill, i was feelin it, first verse was kickin, others were solid, btu it was still all a sogn boastin abotu how good you are, id liek to see you hti soem topics, or some free verse poetry, you got potential, ok structure, hard as hell, lookin at the pic of jay in the corner i thoguht it was him for a min
you got a real jay-esque feel to ur shit, id liek o see some more (and yo im lookin for soem battles, pm me if u up for one)
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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11-06-03, 11:42 PM
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tight drop --i feel ya "new to the board, but not the game--
i put in a decade so far-- since 92 ---your 1st verse was the one that did it, it seems like everyone else agrees too.
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let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape! Last edited by .D. CYPHA : 11-06-03 at 11:46 PM. |
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11-07-03, 12:21 PM
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this was some pretty tight shit...verse1 was the strongest..you got good flow nice vocab and some good wordplay
nice drop |
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11-08-03, 12:18 PM
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thanks for the replies people.
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