~random thoughts put into this...hope you enjoy...please give feedback.... thanks.....


I love you to death, yet I'm scared of you...
Maybe just because of my past...
I love you so much and I'm so happy...
Yet I think of what you could do...

You could cheat and I wouldnt even know...
You could hit me just because I made you mad...
You could love somone else and not telll me...
It could be somone I dont even know...
Or it could be my best friend...

Most wonder why I'm back with you...
After all the pain you caused me...
They say it was bogus and I should kick your ass...
Yet I can't because I love you...

I hated you for what you did...
You cheated, yet I let you back...
Am I asking for a repeated offense?...
I'm known as Devil so I should be alone...
Is that a hint to myself that I shouldn't love anyone?...
Should I trust you?...Sorry I can't...
I wish I could, but I can't, yet I love you...

My feelings are strong after all that happened...
I'm scared...
I dont know what to do...
I love you, but you scare me...
Which overpowers the other?...
Only time will tell....

great drop angel. lots of emotion in this poem. there is a lot u dont know and it will be shown to u in time but until then, keep up the emotion in your pieces cause it is truely a good talent that u have girl. u get all my respect.

MM

Thanks Mopar, Hey I havent seen u in a while, where ya been? Thanks for the feedback and for the compliment. You have that hidden talent too. Most respect

this is really well written, i can really understand where you are coming from...the ending its fuckin' perfect...i thoroughly enjoyed the sense of confusion...going back and forth...my friend went through a similar situation...he is still getting over it...but anways, lovely piece...i really enjoy reading "real" and "raw" poetry...

g'luck and CHEERS!

Thanks Chasin. Glad ya liked it. That sense of confusion that you talk about is what mainly goes on in my head everyday. The pros and cons of everything. I'm with him right now, and he says that he wont hurt me again, but theres that little thing inside that says how do you kno? It's hard, but u'r friend will get thro it. Thanks 'gain for the feedback. Head^ n w/ Most respect.

Jyeh nice peice lots of emotion. Its amazing how you put it shows the readers exactly how you feel. Jyeh.. keep it up mami.
As for the guy.. his good for you. Keeps you on yo toes and thats what you need, weird but true

Have fun!!

interesting

you did the job of letting what you feel inside known
you can't really (well i cant) go in depth about freewrites like this
but sometimes freewrites are the most effective ways of getting deep and serious things off your chest and into the minds of others
keep writin
and remember that w/e the situation you deserve the best, love shouldn't cause overwhelming pain, and if it does then it might not be right, make sure what your doing is right always, stay up

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Thanks for the feedback Hayc and Lady. I appreciate it. I'm still in doubt of him hurtin me again, but I'm keepin a close eye on him. Thanks for the feed on the drop. Most respect.