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11-04-03, 04:29 PM
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:-The Phantom Painter-:
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When I make my Entrance, My Mass is Invisibly Toned
Mystically Unknown, Walking the Path of the Slippery Road Not knowing that I might fall into the Wizadery's Zone Of Addiction, I Sip Liquid Visions and Sniff Mystic Wisdom And Lift Wiked Rhythms till I Split my Twisted System Decoding my mind like I've been Hit by Cryptic Wizards Sit and Sip Liquor and Listen to the Television And Drift Smoke Clouds from Ice like Blizzards I Light Enscriptions and Choke Loud in the Enrichment Of the Sorcerer's Spell, Im Sorta Like A Sword in Hell Sweating Sharply, Darkly moving like Swarms of Elfs I was Born in the Well, And no one can Raise my Bucket In this White Terrain, I Engage and Play my Trumpet Calling my Minds Summit, I take Flight to the demon's Brothers Hallucinating that Im Engaging Walls on the Pavement Satan himself is badly Behaving, And my brain's aching Still, I Stay Taking my Substances and Im Loving It And if you can't show me the devil, then my Blunt will Summon It I Hold the Invisible Pages to my Mind, and start Rubbing It My Throat Riddle's Faces of my Rhyme and Muddles Wit In this room, I Sit and see Puddles Glint, Ceiling is Caving in Im ghost writing at Satan, My words are Fading in the Devils Basin My Heads Full of Agents; trying to escape in the Level of my Matrix Complex Complexion, I might as well be Breath Wrestling Battling against a Mirror Image, my buzzing Head's Wrecking Itself, Everything else becomes a Dimmer Mist when the Mic's Held The Penicillin amplifier Melts my stresses like Marshmellows in Hell Trapped in the Planes of the Artistic Phantom Painter I Light a Spliff, and hear the knocks, The Banging Ranger Last edited by /:Ayura:\ : 11-04-03 at 04:33 PM. |
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11-04-03, 04:34 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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Great piece, that was amazing the wordplay and the creativity of word usuage and what not, great flow as well keep hat up pz
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11-04-03, 04:42 PM
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lol Almost the same reply last post. Still Thanx
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11-04-03, 04:47 PM
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Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
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What a herb....
And Ayura...U fuck....u had to post a big one...Ill read it now..!! lol |
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11-04-03, 04:51 PM
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^^^ Another Hater
 Last edited by /:Ayura:\ : 11-04-03 at 04:54 PM. |
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11-04-03, 04:55 PM
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Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
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that was dope man...Full of the shit u sed u were tryin to achieve...
Well...Job done...u Achieved it...1 thing tho...i didnt get the topic.... it was flowin all the way thru aswell...really slipped off my mind easily... the length didnt seem to matter since wen i was readin it...there was so mmuch diversity there it took my mind off everything ells... Dope piece man...Full of what We Dope UK Cats ar known for.... my opinion... 8.5 or 9/10....SiCk Piece... Peace |
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11-04-03, 04:56 PM
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HAHAHHAHAHA Yes, thats true. |
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11-04-03, 05:35 PM
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this had some sicc multis with just general good wording to make it interesting throughout. .The flow was by far the greatest aspect of this piece
Complex Complexion, I might as well be Breath Wrestling ^ didn't like that comparison. . The rest was all god though. .Voacb, imagery, the whole shabang Pz. |
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11-05-03, 11:13 AM
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^^^thanx^^^
Uppin |
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11-05-03, 04:38 PM
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uppin
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11-05-03, 05:54 PM
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I felt this piece throughout. Flow was absolutely perfect, no flaw, and that made this drop great. Multi's were good, and dog, the imagery presented in this shit was dope. After reading this piece.. and the other drop I read of yours (My bust.. I forget the name).. I wanna drop an open mic Collab with you if you interested, lemme know.
Once again, flawless post, except for the comparison pot1ent mentioned... I didn't like the Complex Complexion to Breath Wrestling comparison. . . Just didn't make much sense, other then that, Dope drop cuz. -Formula. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89771 ^^ Feedback appreciated dog.
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11-06-03, 05:26 AM
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BANNED - Cheating
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Ayura, nice drop... not the best I've heard from you,
but definatley on a level... Fav line(s) "Drift Smoke Clouds from Ice like Blizzards I Light Enscriptions and Choke Loud in the Enrichment Of the Sorcerer's Spell, Im Sorta Like A Sword in Hell Sweating Sharply, Darkly moving like Swarms of Elfs" Today i'ma send you a verse I want you to collaberate wit me on, son... Watch out coz I'ma commin' |
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11-06-03, 12:10 PM
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one wink
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And Your Replies?
This will get deleted if there not in here soon. Thank you. |
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11-06-03, 12:38 PM
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