FormulaMC - I Did You Wrong
LM - Just me and a mic
Bribeone1 - S.S - Betrayed By Faith

...Yall know who this is, Tha kat who had your hands in tha air...
...No stick up, People yellin there's a party over there...

...DJs merkin tha track, Everybody goin crazy...
...Is it me or did I just see your girl with our baby...

...Tha greatest opportunity for snakes to slither...
...Lights out is tha best time for snakes to pilfer...

...I'm blastin at any opposition who's flashin...
...Catch a tight grip, Your life blackenin, I rob niqqas packin...

...You only act tough when your worst fear's not around...
...But, Remember my presence is always around...

...Big stuff but behind doors, You bitch like your girl...
...You still haven't found out why her new nickname is pearl...

...Move to tha stage, Grab tha mic from any spittin...
...Free so well niqqas envy, Sayin mah words are written...

...It's only mentals, Spittin from streams of thoughts...
...Even a thug niqqa gottah give their lyrics their heart...

...Start by thinkin, I won't say no more, It's your soul...
...But, Don't ever come at me like you can play my role...

...Spit lyrics wrapped in salivical spit, My verbal onslaught is contagious...
...And if you thought it was tha mic, Words'll show I'm dangerous...

...I come and go from scenes like day and night...
...So you have to find me if you're willing to fight...

...I raid through houses and live in trenches...
...We only shoot now so there ain't no time for lynches...

...That's why I mob deep, Tryin to find our spot to eat...
...And killing a kat like you won't remove our lust for beef...

...So, Put your toy away, Don't wanna be alive with no face...
...Unless you feel lucky, Then we'll inject tha whole case...

...Sit down and listen before I make your brain go null...
...Take in this venom, Let tha serum circle your skull...

nice

i don't get how you went from party over there to talkin shit-besides that, everything else was tight

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let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape!

Average verse..
Some quotables...
Although i thought some bars need more content to them...
Work on content..
Flow is good...
Try using multies more often, helps flow a lot...
Anyways, nice piece...

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I was diggin it..good stuff here